Black Poetry : fly on the red eye

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by greatgooglymugl, Dec 28, 2006.

  1. greatgooglymugl

    greatgooglymugl New Member MEMBER

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    i fly on the red eye
    brain plyable but mindstate undeniable
    playdate i made with death
    cant find the will to breath my last breath
    another played out conclusion
    prethought in my minds delusion
    unable to find the fusion
    lost in the con- uh oh no repeat
    or else **** up the rules of the beat beat
    god skeet skeet on my feat
    it aint **** got to learn to live with it
    but i cant move aint no sound left to soothe
    bought my ticket time to go...
    i fly on the red eye
    brain plyable but mindstate undeniable
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    welcome to destee.com poetic playground
    welcome to the house of peace & respect
    welcome from above as i bless this some love

    Awesome scribe look forward to reading more of you soon
     
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    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    greatgooglymugl:
    Nice Drop!!!

    Much Luv
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Playing with fire it seems, but then, some like it hot. Welcome, poet, looking forward to reading more of you.
     
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    spicybrown Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I enjoy the rhyme and the rough edge you presented here:spinstar:

    :hulk:

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