Black Poetry : Fly.....Fly...away

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I want to fly away, within metaphors
    Across verbs, an hit a noun
    I just want to fly away
    Feel the breeze of a fairytale
    Into a dream come up in reality
    Have my soul lifted…my heart held
    And drink from his words
    Wrap in warmth and soothe with love
    For passion is released as it
    Enhance my essence he invades my thoughts
    Takes over my mind and we dance in the starz
    He touch me like I never been touch before
    Kiss me and bring me through the rainbow
    I want to
    I want to fly away
    Lift my soul enhance my being
    And float through his words as we go on motion
    That the notion is meant as emotions rise
    Build a castle of stone as the sand blows
    We stand strong within the wind
    And he proclaim his love as we intertwine
    He takes the keys to my spirit and soul
    Holding my mind and mending my heart
    Over and over and over…
    Deep intertwine knowing I am only dreaming
    Fighting love…Fighting passion….
    Fighting the feeling…that is driving me crazy
    But coming alive screaming in my thoughts
    Yearning in my heart…feeling alive
    FINALLY……..
    As my being lifts my gift is given
    Tears begin to run
    Within a treasure… pleasure is released
    As measures are taken
    For his power injected in me
    Mental stimulation
    Body rotation
    Suggestion evaluation
    Of a submission
    I want to
    Oh oh just want to
    Fly away
    Fly away
    .......Fly away
    Within my baby's love


    (c) 2004
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  2. PurpleMoons

    PurpleMoons Administrator STAFF

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    Such beautiful imagery!

    Had me swept away like
    as the melody joined
    forces with the word.

    beautiful Sister!!
     
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    Awwww this is a sweet joint right here...(Think I need a dentist)
    Somtimes you make love sound like it's sorrunding your every move angel, thi one I like alot.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    just awesome how this kiss the page had me all mushy
    this was simply sweet and well verse'd LOVIN it ....wow
    Angel
     
  5. masha

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    There was a place a I had ...

    There was a place I had
    With ocean nearby
    Where i liked to simply stand
    And watch the sky

    I well remember place
    Where I had to gow up so quickly
    I had a homeland
    Feeling of love-it was so deeply

    Sometimes I think of that place
    So simple the trees in every season
    That change throughout the year
    Even if I will stop think about it
    They will still be there

    The river will still flow
    The lives will still fall
    Thw sun will dusk the sky each night
    The Birds still sound their call

    For now I'll dream this well loved path
    Let twillight genle my mind
    And wonder as I go form that place
    Of other paths my restless feet may find
     
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    masha New Member MEMBER

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  7. Monetary

    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    Mz Angel...

    Nice...very nice.

    You represent love well. :D

    :thanks: for sharing your thoughts of him

    :toast:
     
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    tzevi1278 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    love is such a beautiful thing, and you captured that beauty in verse with this drop. wonderful piece Queen, you actually made a brotha smile. peace

    Lyr1c
     
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    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    salute fear then drink a root beer// to calm my nerves then storm with words// on paper that emit a strong vapor// that smells like rhymes that excels like Einstein's// theory of atomics as leerie Ebonics//
    take over. I'm a nut gone loco with a cup of cocoa// in my hand with a plan to sipthe love as I grip the mug// have corrupt conduct not an officer or gentleman like richard geare// make my bed under a tree just to blunder and see// squirrels and girls play trying to get a nut, sugguest I flow well but don't get the best hotel but did sleep at the Holiday inn
     
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    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    What in the hell are you talking about mang? :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol:
     
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