Black Poetry : fly butterfly... fly!

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  1. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ...i shared
    a life line with a miracle
    our hearts together beated the
    rhythm of God's amazing grace.

    ...a life
    entrusted to me
    cocooned she resided
    inside me closer than anyone
    could ever be to someone

    7lbs and 4ozs of preciousness
    that captured my heart and soul
    from her very beginning.

    ...reciprocated
    unconditional love for
    sixteen years i nurtured and
    sheltered her from the world's
    negative winds that could dim the hues
    of her wings.

    ...a senior in high school
    enthusiastically making plans
    to go away to college.

    ...my little girl

    a young woman

    ...i was afraid

    until...
    the other day
    when God revealed her
    wings to me

    ...i saw
    vivid hues of
    intelligence, confidence,
    direction, strength and
    thankfulness.

    ...my maternal soul
    was at peace and willingly
    released her to allow faith to be
    the wind beneath her wings to
    safely soar her into a world of her own.

    "fly

    butterfly

    fly...!"





    feelin'it souldeep!
    Coco :heart:


    Copyright ©2003cju
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was very very beautiful
    right now i am speechless....
    it was posed well..
    much love
     
  3. Jazz4u

    Jazz4u Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was beautiful...j.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    I love butterflies

    happy to read u again where u been Coco...
    this was so sweetly done i love it
    fly fly fly !!! :thanks:
     
  5. Jelani_Dalmar

    Jelani_Dalmar Active Member MEMBER

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    Love your flow, madd talented...I also notice you write short stories...I like that, we have allot in common....
     
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    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My sister Coco,

    Beautiful piece queen indeed.

    blak
     
  7. Randee

    Randee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow beautifully put. And, remember it takes a great mother to raise a beautiful woman.
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Awwwww!!! this is so touching and well posed. awwww
     
  9. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is a
    beautiful flow
    lovely
    Peace
     
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    LURK Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    THIS WAS BEAUTIFUL COCO....I'M LOVIN THIS.....I COULD DEF RELATE
    YA KNOW...GOOD TO SEE SUMTHIN' FROM YOU... :rolling:
     
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