Black Poetry : Fly Away

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Poetrymama, Aug 26, 2005.

  1. Poetrymama

    Poetrymama Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    iwannabe Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The form was unique, the message was clear and precise. Comes across real well and it reads well 2. Short, but i would take quality over quantity anyday. Of course I also love quantity and quality, but it works as long as the quality is there- lol.
     
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    Poetrymama Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    IWannabe, thank you for commenting. I just think the idea of money riches
    and fame is getting out of hand. It won't get us into Heaven.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sometimes a road often traveled is the pathway to hell. The way you constructed this piece did give the reader a sense of spiraling downward. I feel ya poet.
     
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    Poetrymama Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I am not trying to sound self righteous in any way. Our people are getting
    caught up in the illusion of Fame and Riches which is slowly destroying them.
    they are either slandered or incararated when they reach a certain level of
    recognition with society. We are still an endangered species whether some want to believe it or not.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    word up one seek fame through greed knockz at da door of hell
    well said and done sis.....
     
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