Quiet Poetry Lounge : Flowing Poetic Paradise

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Bluewater, May 26, 2004.

  1. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My words whisper in the air
    In hope you will feel my touch
    My thoughts

    Scented candles I have adore
    In hope it will set the mode
    Music playing soft and low
    In hope it will place the tone

    Shutters
    open wide
    Letting in the night sky
    The moon so bright
    The stars shine bright
    Let’s go to
    Paradise
     
  2. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Now, with a flow like this, you should at least provide us with a courtesy glass of ice water...wow...Now that was steamy and passionate. Props on this Blue.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    rockin me in ya motion
    love's long stroke me
    soft and sweet
    my erotic bliss rise
    my mind roam deep
    as the candle burn
    feeling ya body yearn
    the treasure of love
    greatest pleasure flow
    as lip to lip
    rapid beat of hips
    the desires dip slowly
    into the wells of my
    soul as i moan the
    meassures of loving
    vision take me into
    ya bliss and then we
    mix in dis twist
    pushing , pulling
    tongue lashing
    body bashing
    in a destiny of two
    me and u
    as da candle burn
    lights low
    bumppin
    makin sounds
    bed cry
    starz blink
    da moon become
    shy
    throbbin
    with every dip
    gentle bites
    feeling way
    soft & meek
    becoming a we
    together we rise
    meeting the task
    the moans
    da groans
    ummmmm!
    rockin
    hittin
    caressin
    blissin
    kissin
    making compassionate
    magical moments
    u and i
    as we lay
    deep inside my 12 play
    and take flyte inside the
    depth of dis poetic paradise
    ahhhh! my love come flowin
    down like an explosion of fire
    my desires race in place
    tonight we ride da paradise
    poeticlly
     
  4. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Oh my lay it down sis
    :hot: is all i can say.....LOL
    flow on my sis got
    Richie Rich up in the mix
    love the flow sis
    yes!!!!
    Peace Angel
     
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    BLUE...THIS WAS RED...



    :jawdrop: :jawdrop: :jawdrop: :jawdrop: :jawdrop: :jawdrop: :jawdrop: :jawdrop: :jawdrop: :jawdrop:






    HOT...
     
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    My sister Blue

    You BETTA WORK!!!! I was :read: and :read: ing and couldn't stop. Forget water, I need a drink!!!! :jawdrop: :jawdrop: :jawdrop:
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow blue...dang, I need some water too. this was awesome with a big A. you sure took a few of us with you there...thanks a lot for that write.
     
  8. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hi-:wave:watzinaname, mzblkangel, angelicsage jazzymoonchild queentswana
    thank you so much for your love on my flow...yeah just flowing along:) LOL

    thank you once again dear poet for sharing your love:heart: on my poem
     
  9. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yeah i rock you
    in so many motion
    long stroke deep love
    that is what i am about
    just keeping things
    specail this night
    feeling the flow
    of Poetic Paradise
    exploring the treasure
    filled with love
    together we take flight
    riding toward the moon this night
    in your arms
    sweet and warm
    desires increase
    with each mile we take
    going higher
    on a non stop flight
    yes
    straight to the height
    of Paradise :)

    ah yes...thank you $$RICH$$ yes :)

     
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