Black Poetry : "Flowers" for Your Sugar

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by howardtsu, Aug 18, 2006.

  1. howardtsu

    howardtsu Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    if i started to blame others or made excuses for my mistakes

    would you still meet me at the Golden Coral for a dinner of chicken and steak

    or would you close the gate

    to your heart forever

    letting me know that i'll never

    be clever enough

    to become the crucial stuff

    of your soul



    love,

    howard
     
  2. 4EVERLUV

    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You did it again Howard.
    Flo on....
     
  3. Tantrum

    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice little piece
    im assuming its meant for us to want more
    it is very short and the way it ends there should be more added to it
    6.5/10
    uno
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    working it to da max awesome piece
     
  5. howardtsu

    howardtsu Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks $$rich$$

    thanks 4everluv

    what's up Tantrum

    i'll always want more, as long as we're apart
     
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    spicybrown Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :welldone:howardtsu
     
  7. howardtsu

    howardtsu Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hi spicybrown

    thanks :hi:
     
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