Black Poetry : flowers for you

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by SPIRITNORTH, Jan 12, 2004.

  1. SPIRITNORTH

    SPIRITNORTH Banned MEMBER

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    u were my melody
    above soft notes played softly
    violins strings attached slowly
    until u lied to me

    u were the wind blowing
    like spring breeze easy
    honeysuckle and violets
    subject of all my poetry

    but the ultimate betrayal
    leaves me wondering how frail
    your mental capacity must be
    to utlitmately lose
    somebody like me.....
     
  2. rahstagal

    rahstagal Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A goddess you may be, must be appreciated......im sure your will come around..soon enough. Nicely put
    praise
     
  3. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    some people don't think
    pass a moment to think
    about the consequence
    of their action. if they did...
    they'd probably realize its
    not worth it.


    feelin'it souldeep!
    Coco :heart:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very nice flow, cut straight to the point.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    dis was dead on target well done
     
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    re: hi

    good-evening SPIRITNORTH ,


    nice of you to post a new piece...



    that's how it is sometimes... you have given yourself to someone and they end up messing up... cheating/lieing or what ever... seems like NO ONE really wants to be LOVE, as we assume to opposite sex is justing going to misbehave in some way... know that there is someone out there for you...


    keep writing... have a nice night...

    sincerely,
    c.t.adams-///
     
  7. TightAmbitionz

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    I had to repond to you post because this feeling I know all too well.
    Nicely written and to the point.
     
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    Nice write, too late, didn't realize what they had. When you know and have yourself you can and will find one who appreciates it and will be blessed to skim off the dross leaving only the pure precious metal.

    Peace and Blessings
     
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