Poetry Critiques : FLOWER

$$RICH$$

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A
beautiful flower
has blossom to a bloom
wit elegant and radiant glair
risin in da sun awaken to da moon
dancin in da shadows
against da softest tunes
a flower is born today
part way from da hidden
to a life unknown and forbidden
da virgin vice opens
da honey suckle drips dew
sweet melodies runs in virbrant blue
smiles of da day wisk in da wind
thatbeautiful flower
is my lover & friend
 

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ahhhh....another metaphoric delight....beautiful colors....i love the rhyme scheme.

your output is still amazing. I run out of things to say
 

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I know I am kind of late on this post, but when I read this, my mind began to form a picture full of color, a short movie in my mind. When words can do that, it can't be denied that they are powerful and can move the soul. You definitely have a nice flow.
 

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