Black Poetry : Flow Within....

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MzBlkAngel, Sep 17, 2004.

  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Needs a name but this title will do until i get one....QQ suggestions :idea:

    The images in my mind
    Running back and forth
    Every time I close my eyes
    Pulling then letting go
    Wait wait this aint my vibe :nono:

    :love: :love: :love:

    The way he loves me
    And shows me he cares
    The moon and the stars come together
    As we shine as one
    Upon our throne
    He takes my hand as we dance on the orbs
    Upon the galaxy love falls like sweet rain
    As he flows through my viens
    Within a dream of a fairytale
    He was my Prince as I was his Princess
    My suga bear
    My everything
    As his soul pulls mine
    And his spirit feeds me
    Two intertwining
    Becoming one
    Compassion ally
    As we travel loves journey
    Within our reality
    No longer that fairytale
    We have them
    Ups and downs
    But he never stops caring
    Time alone and thoughts running
    I feel his worries know of his stress
    And I still wont turn my back on him
    All that falls down...we seem to pick up
    Much stronger no matter the season
    Within our reasons the foundation is laid
    And words can’t explain him but
    Perfection should have been his name
    His touch
    The kiss
    Our embrace
    I feel through and through
    Near or far
    He is my love of all times
    It takes my breath away with the thought
    But this scribe don’t give justice
    Thinking of My Suga Bear…. :love:

    (C) 2004
    Poetry by an Angel
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    he must be thankful and blessed
    this was nice feeling da depth of he
    flow on sistah i hear ya ova their !!!
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ya hear me Rich....QQ thank you for the love on dis....
    Ya think.... :luvv:

    Peace
    Angel
     
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    Aw, sister, how bout just "suga bear"? Cause this is so tender and sweet and simply lovely.
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you gempis for the love on dis...
    glad you likes

    Peace
    Angel
     
  6. PurpleMoons

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    Yes, I agree with Gempis.
    Suga bear is perfect for this flow.
    Beautiful write sister!!!!!

    It flowed so sweetly!!!!
     
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    :D Sugar bear sounds like a winner to me!
    I liked this scribe can I get some of that flow? :coffee:
     
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    I would call this love's kingdom. your relationship seems as though it is one that is mighty powerful
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This flow was a nice blend, not just of sweetness, but the everyday ups and downs of a relationship.
     
  10. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for the love on dis family....

    PurpleMoons..happy you enjoyed thanks for the love

    caramelpython...QQ brother with issues i see...thanks for the love

    phenomenalwoman..yes very powerful the bond is great..thanks for the love

    watzinaname..true it is all is not perfect but the love is strong...thanks for the love
     
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