Black Poetry : Flow Vicious

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MADDRAPPER, Nov 26, 2002.

  1. MADDRAPPER

    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Flow Vicious

    It’s a criminal situation even with a chemical transformation
    You couldn’t spit acid rhymes, tote plastic nines on location
    Like slow oxidation your flow will rust a foundation
    Sound the alarm and scream even armed with a carbine
    Couldn’t shoot up the scene or pollute the air with benzene
    Even with an overnight accommodation you couldn’t bring
    The right conglomeration of rhymes wearing bling bling
    Hell even as caramel you couldn’t be sweet like candy
    In small blocks chewy and gluey eat drown you with brandy
    Destroys bums, hear the noise of my gun? Poise when I rip someone
    You fail fighting even as hail and lightning you can’t descend
    From heaven my trend is like seven eleven open all night my friend
    Combined words into groups, shoot divine hoops even as a basketball
    On drastic booty call you couldn’t fall through a net, like a plastic maul
    Can’t hammer a nail, grammar fail it don’t blast great, even as a classmate
    Couldn’t be proud in school and its allowed by the rules a trash fake
    Why you loud fool? Bad like shaft even with paragraphs you couldn’t
    Form a sentence and storm the innocent with words and verbs
    You flow with freaks and clowns while I grow by leaps and bounds
    Got multiple ways of expressing so I stays impressing you with noun
    Even with bays of chicken dressing around
    Thickening couldn’t be blessing flavor with a good sound
    Your disgrace structure face rupture like the twin towers blow down
    Your crown to the ground

    MADDRAPPER PEACE
     
  2. PoeticAlize

    PoeticAlize Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I liked

    "It’s a criminal situation even with a chemical transformation
    You couldn’t spit acid rhymes, "

    i loved that line. the whole thing was tight. keep blessin the board.
     
  3. MADDRAPPER

    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    PoeticAlize THANKS FOR RESPONDING TO THIS FOR REAL GIRL
     
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