Black Poetry : Flow Interrupted

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  1. JAD68

    JAD68 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    FLOW INTERRUPTED

    Can we talk just for a minute?
    these few things I gotta let go
    I just really tend to get frustrated
    when stuff interrupts my flow

    Is it really necessary to bug me
    As I sit at my desk for lunch
    "Can I ask a just one question, I promise?"
    and an hour later, my salad won't even crunch.

    Now parents this one's for us
    trying to get a little QT, on the late night tip
    Kids wake up screamin' or bangin' at the door
    groove gets busted and your smack, flip and rub it has to quit

    On the job, you're supposed to be professional
    yet your mouths, say anything but.
    Curse, gossip and slander your peers
    actin' like squirrels chasing a nut

    Lastly, what's the deal up in the church house?
    a brother just trying to get his praise on
    folks comin' in late, and so called saints being fake
    it's all about you and God, so what's wrong?



    Poem by: James A. Davis, Jr.
    (c) October 16, 2003
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    feelin here on dis i know what ya mean
    flow on .....
     
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    nice flow....
    enjoyed da read
     
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    I feel you completely on this...in all aspects

    we could go on and on...

    very original...
     
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    I can definitely relate.
    Flow on my brotha.
     
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    felt u on all tips...
    nice scribe dude...
    peace
    khasm
     
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    JAD68 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks fam... I'm not lettin' em steal my joy!!!
     
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