Black Poetry : Floodgate

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by aqueenpassing, Jun 8, 2004.

  1. aqueenpassing

    aqueenpassing Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Floodgate

    I shiver in thoughts of
    ethiopia you and me
    embraced skin to skin
    passion burns within

    I can’t breathe my life
    source drained by your
    sensitivity your strokes
    of “E’ on your bass the
    soul of all emotions

    How did this happen?
    yesterday I was content
    with being in denial all the
    while I searched for the
    source that could unlock
    the well my true essence
    of life

    I sense my freedom near
    your energy has emerged
    with mine and now it’s just
    visions left to dwell for soon
    the meeting of minds will
    soon unveil and then only
    time will tell if we will continue
    to be skin to skin deep within

    © 2004 AqueenPassing​
     
  2. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    my goodness
    beautiful flow
    skin to skin
    deep indeed :)
    Peace~N~Love
    BlueWater:heart:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    sweet drop u on a roll here ....wow!
     
  4. PropheticNsyght

    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is truly delicious. I can see you and I might flow on the same wavelength. Keep the beauty coming.
     
  5. Beautiful_by_me

    Beautiful_by_me Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :star: And then I read it again...I had to...the flow is just that deep....good work...
     
  6. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    "I can’t breathe my life
    source drained by your
    sensitivity"
    It's lines like this that keep this poem brimming with emotion. Great write.
     
  7. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    well i was gonna take the lines i like
    but smh..... i likes them all
    you place this so sweet
    tight drop
    Peace
    Angel
     
  8. triniti424

    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ahhhhh sista i have missed your voice here
    very emotive and real but i have come to expect that from you :)