Black Poetry : Flojos Debut

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by flojo, Dec 19, 2003.

  1. flojo

    flojo Active Member MEMBER

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    I am elated with excitement
    I am following your every move
    For within those four corners
    it is your greatness, your honor,
    your manhood you must prove.
    I am kayaking on the wild waves of a ring
    Brought to me by the productions of a king.
    I am carried away on the wings of a Butterfly
    I am anticipating the sting of a Bee
    I am watching Ali.

    I am listening to the beats of the heart of your mind
    I am captivated by the thoughts that I find
    I am astounded by your detail
    I am enveloped with your insight
    I am enchanted with you humor
    I am pondering your plight
    I am sailing on a smooth sea of poetry
    I am consuming your brilliance
    I am despaired at your hopelessness
    yet hopeful at your resilience
    I am whisked away to 1920 Harlem
    I am singin your blues
    I am taking a walk in a dark poets shoes
    I am reading Langston Hughes

    I am all of the above
    I am molded I am created, seeping between your fingers
    On the Potters stand
    I am the clay being shaped by your hands
    I am strumming the strings of a million upsets
    I am dancing the dance of a thousand sunsets
    I am encompassing myself with your presence
    I am intoxicated by your very essence
    I am intrigued by your intellect
    I am mesmerized by your eyes
    I am passion and desire personified
    I am passion and desire satisfied
    I am soaring in flight above pretension and taboo
    I am... with you.

    Flojo
     
  2. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Flojo, you are the real deal!!!

    A WELCOME ADDITION

    Stay and become FAMILY
     
  3. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    i am impressed...
    welcome sista poet...
    please feel free to share more
    of your insight
    day or night :)
    one love
    khasm
     
  4. deepy

    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    may the creator in you
    continue the i am..so that you will forever
    flow
    for me
    for you
    for us
    enjoy the gift
    and continue to
    share......
     
  5. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    welcome

    welcome to destee.com
    poetic playground
    welcome to the new home u found
    happy u here sharing da love in flow
    tyte scribe :toast: :toast: :toast: :toast:
     
  6. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :wave: welcome...
    tight drop....
     
  7. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hi :wave:Welcome to the family
    of love and embrace
    this is so so nice
    loving how you flow
    very nice
    Peace
     
  8. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow...and welcome to destee! That ceratinly was a powerful scribe.
     
  9. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WELCOME to DESTEE

    FLOJO
    Welcome to Destee. I like this flow. This is a great Debut!
     
  10. gempis

    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey, welcome!! :wave: Lovin your flow. Give us some more! :D
     
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