Black Poetry : Floetry

Tantrum

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Ladies my heart grows stronger as my love gets older
Naw that aint my flow

Okay here we go my love hits you-Grabs you feel this poetry liquor

Naw I dont like that either-Okay Okay Okay-Here we go

Body like berrirs and chocolates-Apples and Vodkas
So many ways to keep your body proper
So many toys to show you im your bodies body rocker
Heart my melt when you feel this 10 inch body knocker
Tongue penetrates make you feel like remi martin
Trying to get your soul ready for a trojan man
A magnum towin-Python slingin-Sexual raven
With a pistol thats quick to tame you
Who do it like this-Who makes love like this
Hold you against the wall until you cramp from this ________
Get your lyrics together mess with me your soul be singing
Its like that movie when that guy bought her those candies
And she never had a drink and she loved the man so much
She first got drunk off his kiss and the other woman that were in his life at that time meant nothing and she stopped cheating and gave her heart to that brother thats something like this but my love is deeper
I hate to say this but I could be your sexual preacher
I got plenty of time to teach ya
Im not like this others brothers trying to reach ya
I got more than two minutes to show you how deep this is
Lyrics hit your soul aint no weakness
I need a woman like please believe me
When im on my knee im not just trying to want you
Im trying to show you what other brother adores you
This is my soul food no time to warn you
This is my love-My lyrics will swarm you
I Love You
 
Brutha Tantrum

while we love your high poetic energy we have a standard
to only 4 to 5 post on the front page, while you have 8
this far too many do spend some time to give love to others
and allow your work to move down, do visit our
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Do click here ....
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Please we ask that you don't flood the front while others like to
see there work on the front as long as they can.


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$$RICH$$
 
wow tant i dont know why i missed this. i remember the first time you came on the scene. you come along way keep doing what you do. were all artists in our own special way. we may offend someone, touch someone but as writers thats what we do. we raise awareness i notice you and i say things that others won't touch on. and you know what this makes ya unique. even tho we must follow the guidelines the ammendment freedom of speech go along way. its sorta double standard, or freedom of write yeah rite. but in this society everything is hush hush or swept under the rugs. i like being sensual that not all of me that's a part of me. and i seem to touch ones through my writing some i provoke. they can either love me or hate me. but at least i they took the time to look to have something to talk about. when i first got here rich showed me love and then others follow. so in turn i try to show love to everyone who comes through. one kind deed deserves anotha.
so chi-town the last of your kind go on and brush your shoulders off.!!!!!!!!!:kiss1:
 
Thank You Nevar
I thank you for those words
Like I say now people will
Wake Up I believe this
Yet I saw a thread people got a little touchy on
Nothing was said when some of the comments were negative
Towards you but there are double standards all the time
Thats the world we live in but I do appreciate you sister
Much LOve
 

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