Black Poetry : Floetry

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Tantrum, Oct 28, 2005.

  1. Tantrum

    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ladies my heart grows stronger as my love gets older
    Naw that aint my flow

    Okay here we go my love hits you-Grabs you feel this poetry liquor

    Naw I dont like that either-Okay Okay Okay-Here we go

    Body like berrirs and chocolates-Apples and Vodkas
    So many ways to keep your body proper
    So many toys to show you im your bodies body rocker
    Heart my melt when you feel this 10 inch body knocker
    Tongue penetrates make you feel like remi martin
    Trying to get your soul ready for a trojan man
    A magnum towin-Python slingin-Sexual raven
    With a pistol thats quick to tame you
    Who do it like this-Who makes love like this
    Hold you against the wall until you cramp from this ________
    Get your lyrics together mess with me your soul be singing
    Its like that movie when that guy bought her those candies
    And she never had a drink and she loved the man so much
    She first got drunk off his kiss and the other woman that were in his life at that time meant nothing and she stopped cheating and gave her heart to that brother thats something like this but my love is deeper
    I hate to say this but I could be your sexual preacher
    I got plenty of time to teach ya
    Im not like this others brothers trying to reach ya
    I got more than two minutes to show you how deep this is
    Lyrics hit your soul aint no weakness
    I need a woman like please believe me
    When im on my knee im not just trying to want you
    Im trying to show you what other brother adores you
    This is my soul food no time to warn you
    This is my love-My lyrics will swarm you
    I Love You
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Brutha Tantrum

    while we love your high poetic energy we have a standard
    to only 4 to 5 post on the front page, while you have 8
    this far too many do spend some time to give love to others
    and allow your work to move down, do visit our
    Poetic Etiquette Rule
    Do click here ....
    http://www.destee.com/forums/showthread.php?t=11896

    Please we ask that you don't flood the front while others like to
    see there work on the front as long as they can.


    Thank you in advance
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  3. Tantrum

    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is one of my first scribes
    $$RICH$$ reality checked me on this
    Yet much Love to the Brother
    For opening my eyes
    I know you was loving this one though
    Thank You For All Your
    Love & Support My Brother
    I can only hope to continue to shine
    With you my Windy City Brother
     
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    wow tant i dont know why i missed this. i remember the first time you came on the scene. you come along way keep doing what you do. were all artists in our own special way. we may offend someone, touch someone but as writers thats what we do. we raise awareness i notice you and i say things that others won't touch on. and you know what this makes ya unique. even tho we must follow the guidelines the ammendment freedom of speech go along way. its sorta double standard, or freedom of write yeah rite. but in this society everything is hush hush or swept under the rugs. i like being sensual that not all of me that's a part of me. and i seem to touch ones through my writing some i provoke. they can either love me or hate me. but at least i they took the time to look to have something to talk about. when i first got here rich showed me love and then others follow. so in turn i try to show love to everyone who comes through. one kind deed deserves anotha.
    so chi-town the last of your kind go on and brush your shoulders off.!!!!!!!!!:kiss1:
     
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    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank You Nevar
    I thank you for those words
    Like I say now people will
    Wake Up I believe this
    Yet I saw a thread people got a little touchy on
    Nothing was said when some of the comments were negative
    Towards you but there are double standards all the time
    Thats the world we live in but I do appreciate you sister
    Much LOve
     
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    tant when i saw that some think the poems were a little too provocative. i felt a little guilty but i found out there are others poets on here that are sensual to. im not going to call out just look back on some older work and i said i'll keep on. because deep down inside some feel the same way i do but just for background reason is not as open as i. so if your brotha wrongs ya you must as their brotha forgive. this is not my commanment this is god!!!!
     
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    Its like this Sister
    You can either go with the majority
    Or you can be a free thinker
    You have to be able to be a follower
    Before you can be a leader
    Everyone cant be a leader
    Yet everyone I have noticed wants to be
    I think that everyone wants to shine
    IN Destee's eyes in some way shape or form
    I cant knock that at all
    But we have to be able to be ourselves
    Before we can be trusted by someone else
    So I say this I trust Destee if I didnt I wouldn't pay
    Yet I wonder on some of the others intentions
    I see a lot of people testing too see what I will do
    But that kids old and childish so I have stopped that
    Yet I cant get mad cause people are only
    Going to do what you aloow them to do
    I have found by ignoring them makes them even mader
    Than any words you say so I will start using that
    When I get some negative comment I will ignore them
    Life is too short to worry about someone
    Whose life is so sad they get on here to bicker
    Bicker about petty sh-- believe that sister
    But me and the Family im sure has your back
    Scuff them Haters Sister
     
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