Black Poetry : Float...Away

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Take my hand and
    lets float away………..
    To a place we both can reach
    that high
    And just be…
    In the middle of the
    ocean upon a breeze we flow
    Take my hand…….
    Come with me to love land….
    Let me show you how it can be…
    Float with me…
    Embrace the call
    As we float in a melody
    of simple pleasure….
    Taste me from top to bottom
    As I caress you from head to toe
    And we float on…………..
    Take my hand
    Release within the vibe
    And dance to the beat
    And how close we…ummmm
    Take my hand…
    Lets just float.....
    Inside my heart
    Your name is craved in
    pearls and diamonds
    Forever in my soul
    Lets go
    Lets go
    Take my hand….
    Well…as I confess my
    love upon you………..
    ………..Take my hand……
    Let me lead you to our world
    Sunshine for every day
    Perfect moon light every night
    Take my hand and
    lets float away………..
    ……..lets
    ………….float
    ……………….away…..
    within the heavens
    time stop......
    as we set vows within
    the starz dance and
    the angels sing out
    within our land of love…
    Take my hand and
    lets float away………..
    ……..lets
    ………….float
    ……………….away…..Just
    take my hand

    2004​
     
  2. Monetary

    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    MzBlkAngel......

    Take my hand, baby....take my hand. :D

    You were listening to the song called "Float On" when you wrote this piece, huh? If not, it sounds like it. :D

    He had you floating, huh? Was it good? Was it good? That's all I wanna know. :lol: :D

    :thanks: for sharing a part of you with us.

    :toast:
     
  3. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Such a serene feel to this, floating on a wave of love. Gee, those images were so peaceful.
    [email protected], you so crazee, stop saying everythang that goes thru that head of yours....
     
  4. Nita

    Nita Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lol

    [email protected]

    MBA, another tyte drop sistah....Float on :)
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    sweet float on da wingz of lovin
    the two in a lovely hush yeap money she was in a rapture alright
    lol
    tyte drop sistah
     
  6. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    money ... sweetie get :help: :lol:
    thanks for the love...well imma floating ya know :tongue:

    watzinaname..thanks for the reply we all know money is a little krazzzie but we love our brotha money:lol: glad ya likes...floating on

    Nita..well since he got it in my head all i can say is
    float float on............hey now sis thanks for the love on dis

    $$RICH$$...indeed floating on the wingz of love
    is a good thang i dont know about the rapture but i been captured:lol:
    glad ya diggin the flow

    Peace Yall
    Angel
     
  7. MANASIAC

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    Nice Poem. Nice Poem.
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks mani
     
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