Black Poetry : flesh of mine

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  1. thespokesman

    thespokesman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    im ready to make a move
    ive been saying im coming soon before i even wrote the book
    this is one of the poems im sending to the publishers

    tell me what u think

    Flesh of mine


    Flesh of my flesh, blood of my blood

    We come from the same box, same cage, same page
    We both felt the same rage, we both acted on stage
    We sat down, crafted, masted and sailed thru the same nave
    We both were artists, we created the same art, look what we made

    This cup is empty, remember what tempts me
    To fill it, it cracks and remains empty
    The spam and trash, viruses they sent me
    Got us bent g, dreamed Bentley, draining my energy

    Stop dreaming; try to distinguish the linguist of demons
    If I pop the money shot, is it emergent in my semen?
    Is it lingering in what I’m fingering, is this what lead em?
    To the promises of what “theory” demolishes, eat them

    To divide and conquer, separate from my flesh from armor
    Now upon ya, to disarm ya, how do we moniker the monitor?
    We must swarm upon enemy arms that destroyed the conifer
    In civil, political, cynical, a miracle likes Rahab and Monica

    Flesh of my flesh, blood of my blood

    What dwells in me, swells in me, like microscopes, bioorganic
    T-3 chip, heatsink, liquid red plasmic lava, still standing

    We see it.

    Copyright Daniel Davis. 03
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yes yes yes !!!
     
  3. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice flow. Very deep.
     
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    Mentally moving..
    (snaps)
    Nice flow
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice flow
     
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