Black Poetry : fleeting moments

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  1. herlove

    herlove Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i savor each tast so very careful not to waste
    each pleasure seasoned with haste as we touch to find the trace of feelings displaced by the fine lines etched of times weary design filled with words unkind faces with eyes blind unaware of walks forward that fall behind caressed in sadness dressed with smiles on frowns upside down shrill of high pitch cries heard all around deeply rooted beneath surpassed 6ft. underground .....

    so each moment with u i cherish ...... just to know true love never perish each moment with u fulfills dreams dreamed and the unimaginable is not what it seems and seconds, mins., hours in days has much more to say and speaks meaningfully to us in every way so in my memories of fleeting moments i play to hear the voices and loving days we dance to a winds sway in the distance love speak to me in very specials ways and repaint skies that was once gray ....... so i hold your hand and feel Gods way of answer to all the wishes i pray ........ beautiful is the day He sent u my way
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    INDEED how sweet sista
    love da one u wit
    savior every moment
     
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    herlove Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yeah now thats advice that keeps u alive...... u spiritual life without all the misery and strife
    love da one u wit
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed sistah Queen indeed
     
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    YES! If it's all love...that day was a beautiful one...tyte scribe! :)
     
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    this was soooooooooooo beautiful :)
     
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    thanks and much love to u swtT and lovelygoldenone just a reflecting moment of how my lover makes me feel
     
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    This is good....lovely....
     
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    bEAUTIFUL IS THE HEART THAT LOVES SO TRUE! tHANKS FOR SHARING WITH US THE BLESSING THAT GOD HAS SENT TO YOU!

    lOVE THIS PIECE!
     
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