Black Poetry : Flawless Love

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Tantrum, Nov 27, 2005.

  1. Tantrum

    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Im loaded
    Okay
    You Ready
    Lets Go
    I got flawless love
    Speak love
    Feel vibes
    Words spit
    Hiccup my last line
    Most men
    Talk about what they can do
    Other men let there actions show you the truth
    This man paralyze from the shoot
    My sign
    Im a Virgo im freak you should know
    September was the month for the kid
    9th day was the day that I sprawned from the web
    Every woman
    Thanking God cause they fantasy born
    Light skin
    Toned body
    And his whip is so sick
    Its the love
    Naw matter fact
    Its the size of my yup
    Its the look that I give
    Flawless Love
    Make your body do things
    That you never have did
    Spoiled brat
    Thats me-Its the life I live
    Whats happening
    Rog-Dee loving my di--
    Rerun jumping jacks
    Dwayne shaggin his wig
    I got touch tone expressions
    When I reach out and touch
    I got some lips you gone rush
    You got some lips I can suck
    P naw I.M.P
    Im the last of my kind
    Settle down is for people
    Who have lost that fire
    Ugly people like
    Man beauty on the inside
    I shake my head I reply
    You just ugly young guy
    Naw back to the story that I put in your head
    I settle for nothing
    Thats enough said
    She has to be curvasious
    Body tight off the chain
    And the only thing left
    Is Flawless Love-Im just saying
    So riddle me this
    I got a couple of fifths
    You've taken several shots
    Ive taken plenty of licks
    :zipit: So zip it up
    Naw baby hush
    Or you aint getting no....
    Okay

    Sincerly,

    Tantrum "Last Of My Kind"
     
  2. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Tantrum, is making a list with no need to check twice, for he already knows what he sees as being nice, perhaps his intended mate will step up to his plate, and force this brotha to look thrice. Do the do poet.
     
  3. Aaliyahmonet

    Aaliyahmonet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Well spoken my brotha.:) Keep doin ya thang.
     
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    spicybrown Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ride Into The Sunset..........

    See we are the two extremes: a Virgo, and Taurus,

    let my agressive nature ram upon your unscathened love cuz,

    I now see how you're genuine, in everything you post,

    don't need the fifths, cuz from your vibe, i'm drunken, let's toast,

    to brighter horizons,

    got my temperature risin',

    steady on your jock,

    to only you my heart will flock,

    let me be the Lady,

    to floss in ya Mercedes,

    drop the top let the sun shine on us,

    crank up the Kenwood, other rats lookin all jealous,

    see this body so curvacious,

    coke bottle stacked^, bubbly and bodacious,

    i'll be a good girl, and remain on the hush,

    you the HNIC, think i've developed a puppy crush

    :flirt:
     
  5. Tantrum

    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Spicy let me guide you love
    Buttermilk kisses
    Come grind with a thug
    Heart melt
    You fine
    They jealous
    They wyning for what
    The benz is just the turning point
    The Bently is my favorite joint
    Movados with a diamond
    Reflections of my mind and point
    No fifths thats cool
    My ryhmes will get you drunk of course
    Like the kenwood
    Feel the bass in my voice
    Puppy love is a crush
    Is a crush its a must
    H.N.I.C
    Ill take it of course

    Much Love poet Spicy
    Thank You Aaliyah & Watzinaname
    Support for our people
    That is a gift in itself!!!
     
  6. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice roll, I rolled with the flow of this...one of a kind piece
    thanks for sharing it
     
  7. Tantrum

    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank You Queen
    I am happy you liked
    For gracing my flow with your touch
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    love that's flawless
    this was mad tyte brutha
    lay it on down ..............
     
  9. Tantrum

    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank You for the love
    I do appreciate
    Black Support is the love we feel
    Flow On
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hi Tantrum
    your poem has a very cool vibe:)
    Flow on !!!!!! poet

    Peace
     
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