Black Poetry : Flavor

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Chastity, Jun 24, 2004.

  1. Chastity

    Chastity Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The taste,
    The attraction,
    That fed my desire,
    To complete satisfaction,
    That made my taste buds dance,
    On the surface of my tongue,
    A sensation they hadn’t felt in so long.
    The very thought made my mouth water,
    And I had to reel myself from the iniquity of lust.
    All of that wanting, that urge would creep up on me,
    Like a collection of dust.
    But now I’m encountering that taste,
    And it’sss……..rancid.
    Something that was once smooth as silk,
    Now resembles curdling milk.
    All desires now subside,
    After the revelation of that which,
    You thought you could hide.
    Time, energy, attraction,
    Gone to waste.
    I guess I just didn’t have,
    That ‘required acquired’ taste.
     
  2. dstny

    dstny Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It's getting :hot: in here
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    dis was like an heat wave whoaaaaaaaaa!!
     
  4. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hot scribe
    flow on....
     
  5. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You seem to have a wonderful flair for words...there's a lot of sponk in your pen...keep doing you.
     
  6. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very beautiful poem
    enjoying your flow
    Peace
    BlueWater:heart:
     
  7. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sounds like something went wrong somewhere, I liked the way you creatively posed ths on point.
     
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