Black Poetry : Flashback,comeback,gotchaback!

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  1. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The reunion was off to a bumpy start.
    Had me thinking you were playing with
    my heart. Didn't get here when you said
    you would. All of my thoughts on you and
    none of them good.

    But, when you knocked upon my door, my
    heart answered to you.
    Flashback it's 1972 an arm full of books a
    crowded hallway and you...
    Now breathe!
    I feel a southern breeze you extend your
    gifts to me, something sweet to taste,something
    beautiful to behold and soothing music for my
    love craving soul.

    I blink my eyes it's 2002, my heart and head are
    full, what am I gonna do? My first love, long lost
    love, was right here in front of me, looking so good
    to me, smelling so good to me...good to see, I look
    at him and he smiles at me. Apologies and amends
    he's making , a solemn tone his voice has taken
    and I can see it in his eye. This is the moment I
    waited for...the email no longer cried!
    Come back
    Welcomeback
    You never left me
    Thats a fact
    Gotcha Back!

    BJS(C)2002
     
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    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    the sweet smell of lost love rekindled under the moon's light.

    "come in" you say
    but my day was spent inside
    why not go for a ride
    better yet, a walk along the beach
    the moon is full
    there's a gentle breeze.

    if you PLEASE.:)

    NICE.
     
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    Natasha Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Go head on girl

    Good for you !
     
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    Feelin' dah flashback. :)
    Great read as usual.


    Scribeaboutit! It helps.
    CCBSKYN :heart:
     
  5. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yeahhhhhhhhh!

    Got me singing an old Etta James cut, y'all young ones might not know her, but you spoken words children should...At last my love has come along...now I am singing a brand new song...
    BLESSINGS ON YA HOUSE!!
     
  6. mkhaya lo'

    mkhaya lo' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ...that was beautiful my sister, I felt that quite deeply, to discover that a long lost love was never lost at all but always inside. Beautiful to the soul..

    lo'
     
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    MsLB...
    Glad to see u doin fine...
    and rekindlin that flame sho do help..
    sweet piece....

    Epiphany :heart:
     
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    Amun-Ra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Well Done!

    Nice piece for the eyes and ears. I enjoyed it thoroughly. I am in your city at least twice a month. I will be there this Thursday and Friday on business.

    Amun-Ra

    :cool:
     
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