Black Poetry : Fix

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by jazzymoonchild, May 17, 2004.

  1. jazzymoonchild

    jazzymoonchild Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    So this is what it's like...
    getting hook'd
    on a person
    place or thing,...
    or poet..

    Week after week,
    I am drawn,
    to the light
    the flow
    both hot and soft
    warm and hard

    my dialup -- intravenenous
    like an addict's needle
    I am tapping my vein
    for the next dose

    what will she teach this time?
    how does he make me feel like tis
    without feeling me at all?

    Tap, tap, tap

    my eyes are fixed to the screen
    a hypnotic trance
    I'm under

    Destee, the master
    its pages my playground
    where I get high


    jazzymoonchild, copyright @ May 17, 2004
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    sho nuff well said fix of mixture
     
  3. jazzymoonchild

    jazzymoonchild Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you! :spinn:
     
  4. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was sharp, this poetic valley is easy to get hooked on, I loved this write!!!!
     
  5. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Well all I can say is...JOIN THE CLUB!!! ...we'll all ride that short yellow bus to "DESTEE'S ANNONYNOUS" :laugh:
    I like your style...keep writting (after we get off the bus).
     
  6. theDynasty1979

    theDynasty1979 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    positive addiction... nice flow!
    peacebeMsDy
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very nice
    i likes the vibe
    and this site is just love
    Peave
    Angel
     
  8. jazzymoonchild

    jazzymoonchild Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you for the love

    :D :flirt: :spinn: :glasses: :luvv:

    To all of you who have responded to this piece,

    watzinaname, queentswana, theDynasty1979, and mzblkangel,

    Thank you for the love! I'll return the same. You guys inspire me.
     
  9. rasheed

    rasheed Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    jazzymoonchild,
    Nice write, i know the feeling....
    main veining myself.....

    Peace and Blessings.....
     
  10. jazzymoonchild

    jazzymoonchild Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :roll: :read: Thank you, Rasheed. I am among great writers here. Much love...