Black Poetry : Fix-It Man

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by 1poetsought, Jun 3, 2003.

  1. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Estrangement ruins families
    Desertions run amuck ~
    Forgiveness,
    Then a problem...
    No longer makes the point

    Remember what life promises
    Love and care to share
    Good to go acknowledgment
    Always, being there...

    Break the broken cycle
    Fix it,
    Then commit...
    All the pain, ever felt
    Love,
    Helps forget!


    1poetsought ~ copyright 2003
     
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    love covers a multitude of sins.:) but love doesn't cover all. read NADIA*BINTA's "Silenced W/n..."

    love the sentiment, 1poetsought. rage your war for right...i'll fight beside you.

    let the river flow.
     
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    awwwwwwwwwww poet that was beautiful glad you blessed us with it
     
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    indeed ur not alone
    i too am beside u in this upward struggle
    flow on
     
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    IF IT AIN"T BROKE

    Brothers and Sisters, that's what I'm talkin' about!

    Show your love! :heart:
     
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    you get all my :heart: here :) Bishop, you made a good point with ths poem. Im glad you wrote it :)...
    SwtNess
     
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    man...we have a lot of broken cycles
    your scribes help
    fixit man
    peace
    khasm
     
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    I love it when a brotha speaks on the ultimate healing of "LOVE" ya reached inside a healed a lil of me.
    Thank you for bein you :)
     
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    You can never get enough LOVE its the one gift that keeps on givin :)
     
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    So many thanks to evereyone! These thoughts at a glance, appear to be idealistic. However, one person can make significant changes in another persons life simply by wanting to do so.