Black Poetry : FIVE SENSES = READ ME NOW!!

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  1. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Five (5) Senses
    sight of YOU
    sound of YOU
    touch of YOU
    taste of YOU
    smell of YOU

    Five (5) Senses x 2
    sight of US
    sound of US
    touch of US
    taste of US
    smell of US

    Four (4) stages of Sexual Response ***USING***
    Five (5) Senses x 2 Constant

    EXCITEMENT> sight of you and I; sexually
    percolating through progressively more
    abstract levels; blending/brewing

    PLATEAU> sound of you and I; our intense auditoria;
    exploring and exploding...sexual arousal-
    an epiphany


    ORGASM> touch of you and I; pressure, pain, warmth & cold
    taste of you and I; salty sweetness, thick Amaretto
    Liqeur or a Very Special Original Pale (VSOP)

    RESOLUTION> smell of you and I; I inhale you, you exhale me
    exalted adoration - pleasing to our nostrils

    The aroma of our coffee remains long after
    evoking the memories and feelings for the hotline between 4+5 equaling 9.
    Now where is the 6?
    ...using my sixth sense to delineate this clairvoyant and supersensual imported brown bag fantasy
    An open invitation for a utopic exchange~
    One cup of cappucino will not suffice
     
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    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Awwww Dayuuuum N2!!!!

    This is indeed hot like fire!!!!

    Sizzle Me ;)
    GQ
     
  3. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Didn't mean to scewer ya'...

    I'm glad to know this piece made you feel that way... I like it alot...!!

    Thanks for lending me your mental - for the images I've imposed upon you....
     
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    Do it ta me N2!!!

    When ya think ya got me hot
    And I'm actin' like I'm not
    I'm sizzlin baby!!!! ;)

    Keep my mental heated!!!
    L&R
    GQ
     
  5. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    GQ -
    Doing it to ya' tha way ya' like me to!
    I'm glad you're heated up...need a cool drink?
     
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    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yep!!!!

    As long as it be a cool drink of you!!!! ;)

    Refresh Me!!!
    L&R
    GQ
     
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    hmmmm ... wondering what brand of coffee you drink'n Sis

    need to put it on my grocery list

    :)

    Destee
     
  8. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Coffee Beans...

    Thanx Destee- for yet another read!

    Drinkin' cappucino here!
     
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    well scribed poet...

    peace,blak
     
  10. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Blak~

    Again, you're reading me, as I too am reading you!!

    Thanks :)
     
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