Black Poetry : Five Dayz Before Christmas

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Five dayz before christmas
    my true love came to me
    asking for a wish under da tree

    if u only knew what she wanted
    me to do
    it was something to lover do
    so sweetly i came 2 thee
    wit a heart openly
    a sound mind
    a ear listening intently
    and ask my love
    what will it be !

    here what she said to me
    be by my side
    care for me
    sho me da comfort of thee

    softly spoken i replyed
    always and a day
    i'm with u
    to caress ya cares
    help u through what u bare
    be yo guiding light
    sho u things alright
    i will comfort u with my heart
    shower u in all dis love
    keep u safe & warm
    i will respect & honor
    and never mumble
    i hold u close
    share my thoughts
    give u what ever Queen need
    i am yo charm
    keep u from harm
    alwayz be their to cuddle
    ya my weapon of love
    my smile of joy
    da heart of my life
    now be my wife
    on dis day i pose my ring
    as i vow to be wedd
    and sing da happiness
    five dayz before christmas she came to me

    :heart: :love: :heart: :kiss: :heart:
     
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    lpoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice drop rich

    dont know why everyones sleeping on this one
     
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    Yo Man-

    if this is just a poem the sentiments are true. If it is real life then congrats to you and yours, let the fire burn, let the fire burn.

    JAH Lives!
     
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    RICH, you wrapped the CHRISTMAS season up right in this write
    GO HEAD POET..... DO IT
     
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    Bishop Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Loving this scribe my brotha!!!!!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Thanks my bruthas of flow
    merry christmas guys
    spreading da cheers round here !
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yeah! for me & u cindy
    as we ring in da new year 03
     
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    woooooweeeee!!
    ya got me smiling big ova here
    Thanks sweetie
    ya Da Chick of mines indeed
     
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    shaz Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    drop it like its hot
    very smooth $$RICH$$
     
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    A wonderful expression of Love!

    Your love poems are so genuine, it makes the mind wonder. But, kowing you we would all here the pronouncement like the sound of thunder, to cherish the one we love and propose on Christmas day...why what lover would have it any other way...except Valentines Day did you know Christmas was the day most people are propose to? Just a little journalistic trivia...
    Blessings on ya Poetic House!:kiss:
     
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