Black Poetry : FIT TO BE TIED!

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  1. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    YEAH! That is what I said...
    My head and heart so heavy
    I can hardly get out of bed.
    Somebody told me it would
    be alright...they lied!
    That's why I'm "FIT TO BE TIED" :uhoh:

    LORD! How much can one woman take...
    said I would bow but not break...
    I think I made a mistake...excuse
    me while I have a sixty second
    nervous breakdown , with no kids
    and no lover around.... :spin: :censored: :crying: :uhoh:
    Everbody saying I will be there if you need me...alibi's
    That's why I'm "FIT TO BE TIED"!

    *I'm betta now!
    HOW? can one woman sustain so much calamity?
    If it wasn't happening to me I
    woudn't believe it could be!
    NORMAL! What the he77 is that?
    I reach for my purse and pick up my hat! :uhoh: :spin:
    Again and again I said I have cried my last cry...NOW I LIE!
    AND EACH TIME I DIE INSIDE...
    THAT IS WHY I AM FIT TO BE TIED...

    OOOOOOOOOH! I sit by your bedside and I swallow my pride.
    As I dry a tear from your eye! I vow and keep the promise
    now is not the time to cry! Weak and frail is my little diva
    head as clean as a baby's but....NOW WHAT? :censored: :uhoh: :angel1:
    LORD GIVE ME STRENGTH! I BELIEVE! I BELIEVE!
    AND THEN SOMETIME I THINK IT'S ALL A LIE...THERE IS THE TEAR
    IN MY EYE :crying:
    And that is why "I'm "FIT TO BE TIED".

    DIDN'T, even know what it meant until now.
    And old country saying , but it fits and how...
    Tie me down with a rope so I can keep from
    falling to pieces or going mad...tears rain on
    my soul...and on the inside I am sad!
    Misunderstood, midweek crisis, lost $100
    dollars, son of a motha...wish I could fly
    away and be with my brotha!
    That is why I am fit to be tied!

    BJS(c)2004
     
  2. Keita Kenyatta

    Keita Kenyatta going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    Woman...that was tight !!! Capital T ! I felt that so much that I'm checkin under my bed to see if somebody got rope ready for my mule. LOL
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    my sista
    i am feeling you
    on this flow..place it down
    and just release...
    peace
    Angel
     
  4. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    THANKS FOR LETTING ME GET SOME THERAPY!THANK

    THANK YOU FOR READING AND RESPONDING!
    I REALLY NEED TO VENT MY FEELINGS, IT MAKES
    ME FEEL BETTER WITH ALL THAT IS GOING ON!

    *RAVEN TOOK A TURN FOR THE WORSE AND
    IS BACK IN THE HOSPITAL! PLEASE CONTINUE
    TO PRAY....

    BLESSINGS ON YOUR HOUSE!
     
  5. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    vent my sista:grouphug:
    i am so sorry to
    read this here
    and she and the family
    will continue to be in
    my prayers
    Peace and Love
    Angel
     
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    Alpha Male Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Re:to Msluciousb

    Thight flow
    I really felt this
    Internet poet continue
    scribe and flow
    great job


     
  7. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    my whole heart's :crying: not only for you...but with you as well. I know I can speak for all when I say Raven have clawed, raked, tugged and flooded the hearts of us all but...we know NOT...what GOD knows. But this I do know with a surety...there is a mighty powerful source that sent the one and only "ANGEL" (yourself) to love her unconditionally. And that same love goes out to the sweet little angel...throughout this entire FORUM.

    we all love you...and we're all in this...TOGETHER!!!
    if you lose your wings...don't be afraid to fall...
    there's a blanket of love...beneath you

    with all my/our love and support...Tswana, Keita, and Makeda (our daughter)
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    felt ya sistah
    it will all pass
    and better days ahead
    this was awesome tyte
    they lied but u didn't
    so get up move on
    flow on !!!!
     
  9. angelicsage

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    Sister...we feel you
    let the emotions and stress
    flow...we're here and were
    listening...you can borrow
    our shoulders and our
    handkerchiefs...but
    most of all you can
    have our "prayers"...
    because they're with you...
    Sincerely...Stay strong sister
    this too shall pass... :grouphug:
     
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