Black Poetry : First Victim Consumed

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Bishop, Oct 22, 2002.

  1. Bishop

    Bishop Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Flying through the night sky
    I landed at an open mic
    where I knew my prey
    would be performing
    not far from the dark skies of Chitown
    I went in
    Listened to their pathetic vibe
    of love and trust
    when they themselves have betrayed
    Love's Favorite Son
    I listen while they spouted
    verbs of peace
    unity
    in a time of confusion
    I listened as the applause went forth
    and then it was my turn
    Name announced
    the poor little scribe
    knew judgement had found them out
    I began to freestyle
    tear into their flesh
    with the sword of vernacular vengeance
    draining of their life giving flow
    and picking my teeth with their bones
    left the prey sitting gawking
    as I silently left
    climbing back into the night sky
    smelling the scent of my next prey.
     
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    Legacy21 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    HA, man I am diggin this. The Poetic Avenger. How many amusing situations have I seen like this, but sometimes its not even funny when the words get deadly. Open mic is just that, open mic, not a combat field, but I feel you. When there is a need for justice and the sword is in your hand use your weapon wisely. Nice flow. Madd Respect!
     
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    Thank you for feeling me on this...Fortunately for that person I didn't name their name, but they got the message.....BTW good to see your flowing a little more frequently again......
     
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    Bishop ya making an impact on da nightly prey
    man i was into dis here.......keep hittin'em
    fast quick & hard
     
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