Quiet Poetry Lounge : FIRST TYME !

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Peer eyez i watched you
    i didn't know of one soeth
    yet in merriment warmth
    i yearn at deep desires of,
    i didn't understand so on
    this pedestal i stood peering
    facing the maze of structure
    my love was fed in complete
    through your pure intertainment
    i felt so unworthy and naked
    i didn't know, but only heard
    felt the vowls and verbs clash
    clinging in mystical circles
    i only saw and u laying still
    grasping me to an unconditional
    submition and my heart flooded
    in rapture of your beauty
    i struggled to understand in full
    but i knew da hidden ecstacy
    i fell into your slumber and giveth
    me upon ya temple of lustful gleam
    i vow and knew am yours for eternity
    you stood beside me embracing me
    pass my faults and flaws even when
    my character failed your grace was
    there to comfort and it was my very
    first tyme in true love
    out of nudity i married into da cloth
    my handz lived on da sparrow i seeth
    we now reside in this shack
    if i only knew days past we would have
    substain yet ye lyrics bond thy temple
    to comfort and blessed da place
    i've loveth you for so long, i de confess
    not my lips of lie but the hand
    if i only knew of and can feel yo face
    seeth u i can understand this feeling
    that i loveth and hold close to my heart
    My First tyme love i'm still embeded in u

    To be continued Pt.II next

    A Dyamondluv vow
    Nu~wave~Ink~creation
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    PoeticManifesta Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    that line alone.. wow... i find myself engulfed in your words. gr8 drop.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Thankz poeticmanifesta for the warmth happy you enjoyed first tyme.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Perhaps she sees the inner you past your flaws because you see her in the same way... Wow, this was quite a touching flow Rich.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    thankz watz happy u was able to see inside the first tyme .
     
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    Proof positive of your poetic genius, $$RICH$$.
     
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    big thankz 1poet for the love brutha as i'm learning .
     
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    first tyme can be divine
    yet deep and scary until
    the true beauty is released

    Thankz everyone for the visit and love shared here
     
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    Tha-Emissary Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Gotta love that ending! It just lingers on you. flow on to the next episode folk!
     
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    word up Emissary....thankz for the visit as pt 2 hits
     
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