Black Poetry : First Touch...

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  1. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is another song, just somethin' fun i wrote about a club experience...doesn't flow like poems, but u understand! lol


    VERSE 1:

    it was late at night, feel your eyes on my body
    the room is full, but your the only one i see
    we start movin', closin' the space between us
    don't know where my mind is, do know i want you baby
    the next thing i know, your standin' right in front of me
    my minds anxious of what could be
    i don't mind what you do
    but just move to the music
    and move with me


    CHORUS :

    first touch
    your hands movin' down my body
    i love
    the way it slips into mine
    draw me
    closer so i can feel your heartbeat
    tender
    fingers caressin' my skin
    one hand slips down
    won't tell ya'll where it goes though
    bring it back up
    my knees are gettin' weak
    first touch
    your hands movin' down my body
    this first
    first touch started everything


    VERSE 2:

    there's a crowd around, wonderin' what's goin' on
    the song playin' is so perfect
    we start actin' out the words that are bein' sung
    this is so, so sexy (that's what im thinkin')
    girls standin' around, are lookin' jealous
    but i don't care, i'm above all that
    i don't care how you do it
    but just move to the music
    and keep dancin' with me

    CHORUS (again)


    HOOK 1 :

    i don't want this moment to end
    i wanna keep dancin'
    things are gettin' too heated
    both of out hands in the air
    your eyes penetrate in mine
    i take in every action
    just touch me all over

    oh that first touch


    CHORUS (again)


    HOOK 2 :

    tremblin'
    nervous
    what can happen?
    kinda glad
    there are people around
    yeah, yeah, yeah, yeah
    the next thing i know
    there are
    sweet, sweet kisses
    bein' planted on me now


    (back to chorus a couple of times)
     
  2. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i like it Lovely... u should really do sumthin with this song writing, make it happen girl!!! shoot... write me a song lol
     
  3. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lol, thanks girl!!! :) glad somebody like it:)
     
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    :hot: ha, reminds me of the guy i met, wow, that was slick goldie!:jumping:
     
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    You write some great songs. This brings back memories for me. I love it, I hope you have more that I can read.



    skindeep was here.....
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    u go gurl!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    i told ya time to sign a contract
    dis be as sweet as ever
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Lovely, you didn't give me a chance to wake up and read it! I love this song!!! Reminds me of....ummm....ill end this reply now :)
     
  8. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks so much more and skindeep:)
     
  9. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    rich ur so sweet!:)

    and swtT thats funny lol...thanks girl
     
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