Black Poetry : First Time's Special

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  1. FattDaddy2k3

    FattDaddy2k3 Member MEMBER

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    Her skin. . .
    A soul wave of ebony Love
    Longs to embrace shades of true passion
    To be touched as it never has before

    I enter. . .
    The energy that compliments her
    The everlasting lust felt between her thighs
    And the subtle breath she feels at her lips

    She trembles. . .
    Breathing deeply, her body hungers for my touch
    Longs for the simple, sweet caress of soft fingers on skin
    Knowing she will be forever changed by this night

    She moans...
    Fulfilling fantasies she had once only dreamed
    Torn between a bitter-sweet pain and a feeling of love
    But never wanting this night to end

    She sighs. . .
    A new relief has overtaken her
    Vibrations continue surging through
    She smiles lightly, thinking to herself, "first time's special"
     
  2. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very nice sensual vibe here, Fattdaddy2k3, and welcome to destee!
     
  3. FattDaddy2k3

    FattDaddy2k3 Member MEMBER

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    Hello Everyone

    First off, I just want to say hi to everyone. And second, but very important thanx watzinaname! :jumping:
     
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    phenomenalwoman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    brotha i'm feeling this...got me all hot and bothered and ish
     
  5. FattDaddy2k3

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    i appreciate it phenom.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    bring it on dis was awesome and heartly
    ya pen speaks in whispers of da dark
    flow on lovin it brutha
     
  7. Khasm13

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    welcome fattdaddy...
    nice scribe man...
    hope to see more...
    one love
    khasm
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    welcome to da fam!!:wave:

    this was :hot::):blush:
     
  9. FattDaddy2k3

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    Thanx for all of those replies. Khasm13 were you in Voice Chat last night? :x:
     
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    yeah...that was me holmes....
    keep flow'n son
    you got some fans :)
    one love
    khasm
     
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