Black Poetry : first time

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by smallworld, Dec 17, 2002.

  1. smallworld

    smallworld Member MEMBER

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    You'd like to see what I can do with these words on the page
    So you can react with passion or outrage
    You want to see me form a flow and compose a sweet rhyme
    So you can can take it all in like it's a tight rolled dime
    I want to show you my growth and let you measure my skill
    So you can say with one fist in the air "babygirl keepin it real"
    I'm not jealous of anyone I just wanna know how it feel
    To have a crew down enough for each other we'll live, die, or kill
    But even if none of it happens it I won't count it a tragedy
    All I really want is somebody to feel me.


    (From a first timer, glad to be in the company of dynamic poets)
     
  2. UL820

    UL820 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WELCOME AND WE DEFINITELY FEEL YOU
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    welcome welcome welcome!!!

    welcome to da house of destee
    ya well felt emotionally dis was on hit
    welcome from above upon family & friendz
    welcome in !:) :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave:
     
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    I feel you

    I hope you feel me when I say

    "flow on flow on...no matter what go on"

    700
     
  5. lpoet

    lpoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice first drop

    and welcome stick around for awhile
     
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    WELCOME! WELCOME! WELCOME!

    First time ain't nothing like the thrill
    And baby girl as long as you keep it real
    You will grow and turn this thing like
    Ezekial and the wheel...express yo self
    be yo self and grow with yo flow and
    if you have questions then ask some
    body "Who thinks they might know!"
    :D "Then go ask Destee or one of our
    Fantastic Moderator's " LOL!
    Like yo spunk!
    BLESSINGS ON YA HOUSE!
     
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    redlady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    welcome....enjoying the flow
     
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    Welcome
    I Love the freshness
     
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    Bishop Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :wave: :wave: Welcome to the fam!! Love this piece you posted, looking for more...Feel free to relax and mingle with the rest of the fam....kick yo shoes off have some cookies and kool-aid.....
    :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave:
     
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    Well, Sister, I FEEL YA! :toast:

    And THIS was your "first time?!" :bowdown:

    I LOVED IT!

    And I was gladdened to be in your company as well! This was succinct but spoke to so much and so loudly!

    Oh, yes, I can feel ya!

    Come on back and show us your growth and skill!---This example was just the tip of the iceberg!








    And........ :birthday: