Black Poetry : first time unsure

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Derrick Jay, Apr 19, 2002.

  1. Derrick Jay

    Derrick Jay Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    rock shocked spots
    over delicate panty tops
    ghosting crafty locomotion
    feeling cocoa butter lotion
    that swirl
    popping from a young womans skirt
    flirts with predicted precipitation
    ultimate wafting chilltowns
    eminating across local gyrations
    jazz times find shaking tambourines
    thighs spread at the scene
    insertion interjections
    struggling to find new meaning
    the cost of playing toss up
    reckons significant deliverance
    posting stroke filled diaries
    in hoping fondled remembrance
    don't wanna stay too long
    strong ties are for the befallen foe
    straighten pressed polyester pleats
    fresh coat of lipstick
    and walk with to the door
    eyes closed to missed kisses
    out one half-stroke before passions plight
    parting shot short and intense
    spending the rest of life in one night...
     
  2. eternal

    eternal Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I will never forget my first time....
    Thank you for remembering it for me.
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  3. Derrick Jay

    Derrick Jay Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yeah...that beginning of the beginning. its definitely worth taking a look at...

    One,
    Derrick Jay
     
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    oooh have mercy! the tip of the sweetest of mysteries poised just at the edge of the lip of that profound and deep well of revelation....yes... more than I could ever have imagined... so much more...

    thank you for knowing (I'm beginning to babble up in heah this moanin) :wink:

    alyce
     
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    out one half-stroke before passions plight
    parting shot short and intense
    spending the rest of life in one night...

    lovin the end of this peice............
    you gonna make me write bout this
    great work poet
     
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