Black Poetry : First time sharing online!!!

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  1. CookieDelicious

    CookieDelicious New Member MEMBER

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    Kiss Me

    I can tell you want to kiss me. Look at you the quiver of your lips.
    You watching my body move...how I walk.
    For me, your body will burn.
    But then when I speak for more of me, you will yearn.
    My lips stay soft and wet with natural glisten and glow.
    A man would be crazy to not indulge himself wanting me more and more.
    Kissing you is all I think of passion is my game. I know you want to kiss me
    In your voice, I hear the strain.



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  2. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Seems like just a matter of time before you both experience what you desire, a long lingering kiss. Your first time sharing online? Much enjoyed the read, poet.
    Welcome to Destee.com. Please make yourself at home, because you certainly are. While you're getting comfortable, please aquaint yourself with our poetic rules of etiquette, http://destee.com/forums/showthread.php?t=11896, and our general forum rules, http://destee.com/forums/showthread.php?t=8084. I'm looking forward to reading more from you!
     
  3. CookieDelicious

    CookieDelicious New Member MEMBER

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    Thank you...I wrote the poem a while ago, but that was my first time sharing online...I'm glad you enjoyed the read...I am currently working on a couple of mini novels and anthologies and I am also going to be featured in an up coming anthology.
    Thanks for the welcome. I like this site.
    ~Cookie Delicious, Literary Artist~
     
  4. CookieDelicious

    CookieDelicious New Member MEMBER

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    This is the original version, The lesbian version, which I didn't realize that I had posted was rewriten for friends of mine.:em19:
     
  5. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    peace poet welcome to Destee

    thanks you for sharing

    and hope to see show more

    thank you very much

    peace
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hello cookieDelicious

    Welcome, welcome to the house of love, respect and unity!
    I liked the piece you dropped, looking forward to reading more of you...
    Again, welcome home.
     
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    Yes Poetess...this

    is delicious!

    can't wait to read more.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    welcome to Destee.com so happy to have u sharing poeticly
    look forward to reading and feeling da flow more........welcome!
     
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