Black Poetry : FIRST TIME, LAST TIME

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Leaky103, Jan 10, 2004.

  1. Leaky103

    Leaky103 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    DANG!! YOU WERE FINE IN YOUR 6'5" FRAME
    BUT I WAS AFRAID TO STEP TO YOU TO KICK MY GAME.
    YOUR EYES SPARKLED WHEN YOUR DIMPLES APPEARED FROM YOUR CHEEK
    WHICH MADE ME THINK YOUR WERE A GENTLEMAN, SWEET.
    MY GIRL SAID YOU WERE GLANCING OUR WAY
    SO I TURNED TO LOOK BUT YOU WERE WALKING AWAY.
    I COULDN'T JUST LET YOU LEAVE AD MISS THIS OPPORTUNITY
    SO I SWALLOWED MY PRIDE AND WENT TO YOU DIRECTLY.
    I STOOD THERE IN SUCH A SERIOUS TRANCE
    WHEN YOU ASKED ME IN YOUR SILKY VOICE TO DO THE "STEP DANCE"
    AS YOU ENGULFED YOUR HANDS IN MINE,
    I THOUGHT THIS MUST BE LOVE FOR THE FIRST TIME, LAST TIME.

    NOW, IT'S A YEAR LATER AS I SET UP ANNIVERSARY PLANS
    AND YOU COME HOME THINKING YOU WERE TRULY THE MAN
    AS YOU WERE RANTING AND RAVING ABOUT SEEING ME ON THE STREET
    AND SAYING THAT I WAS LIKE THE OTHERS, A B****, A FREAK.
    BEFORE I COULD EXPLAIN THE TRUTH, I FELT THIS SMACK HIT MY FACE
    NOW I WAS SHOCKED BUT I KNEW ONE OF US WAS NOT LEAVING THIS PLACE
    ESPECIALLY AFTER YOU LOOKED AT ME WITH THAT SANGUINE SMILE
    AS MY MIND WAS RACING FOR MANY MILES
    TO THE TIMES I WITNESSED MY MOM BEING HIT
    BY A MAN WHO STOOD PROUD BUT WAS NOTHING BUT A LI'L BIT.
    I REMINISCED TO THE DAY WHEN MET AS YOU STOOD SO TALL
    BUT IN THIS INSTANT I KNEW YOU WERE ABOUT TO FALL
    WHEN I WENT INTO MY PURSE AND REVEALED A NINE
    AND LOOKED AT THE ONE I LOVE AND UTTERED, "FIRST TIME, LAST TIME".
     
  2. Sweet baby_face

    Sweet baby_face Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :jawdrop: DAYMUN!! This is so deep!I don't know to say about this right here.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Watch out now...I guess if they hit you, they better make sure they knock you out, or else....Liked the way you put this together, making us think about this serious issue.
     
  4. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    well posed
    very deep write....
    flow on.....
    this was str8......
    Angel
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    woooooweeeeeeeeee!!
    feeling ya on dis slow walk ya way in
    tyte scribe
     
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