Black Poetry : First time here-show me love

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by quest, Jan 8, 2002.

  1. quest

    quest Active Member MEMBER

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    sup people this is my first time here so give me so feed back if you don't mind.

    -Watching Love-

    The eyes of beauty seen from within ones mind
    The sight of beauty so intensly focused
    to the poin that I am blind,
    Why must I stare so hard...
    At this beauty I see from my eyes
    Is it she becomes more beautiful time after time
    As I love her with my thoughts and kiss her with my heart.

    I feel the first thought of love each time I see your smile
    It feels like my heart loves you for the first time,
    everytime I hear you say you love me.

    The sight of joy is in front of my face I'm scared to blink.

    Though time passes and my sight stays the same
    It doesn't matter as long as I see you and I remain
    In love...
    Maintain the love...
    C'mon love.

    Let us use these eyes within to watch our lives blend
    As we proceed to rejoice over our growth
    As we watch love.

    quest
     
  2. Destee

    Destee destee.com STAFF

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    Welcome ~ Welcome ~ Welcome

    :wave: :wave: :wave:

    Welcome ~ Welcome ~ Welcome

    very nice flow Quest :)

    Thanks for joining us and sharing. I'm not sure why your post
    went into the queue, but it did, which is why it didn't get posted
    immediately after you submitted it. It may have been that you
    clicked on "include a poll" but didn't include a poll (or something
    like that). Anyway, thanks for sharing and please make yourself
    at home.

    :heart:

    Destee
     
  3. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    quest

    WELCOME :wave: :wave:


    Well written scribe. Look forward to reading more of what quest has to say!

    Pull up a seat and enjoy your stay! :wave: :wave:


    N2
     
  4. eternal

    eternal Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Quest, this is beautiful!!

    First here is a hug {}

    And welcome to Afronet...this was a very well written heart felt expression. I look forward to reading all you have to offer.
    I will be watching you!!
    Love is...
    Eternal;)
    :love: :kiss: :love:
     
  5. thepoetsean

    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    what's buzzin cuzzin'???

    my boi qwestknowledgewords! Glad to see you at it again! Would love to see more...I got some ideas about the topic u appraoched me with last nite...would like to post it and have you polish it off...is that cool?

    hollatchaboi

    greg (espee)
     
  6. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    welcome welcome welcome !!

    my poetic friend come right in upon da playground
    of destee's place and flow like u know as i fly above
    spreading love ........welcome within upon family & friends
    :toast: :jumping: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :jumping: :toast:
     
  7. Bishop

    Bishop Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Greetings from the Lighthouse!! Man this was off da chain!!! Welcome........give us some more of this flow.

    Bishop
     
  8. Danilyn

    Danilyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Beautiful!

    Welcome to the fam quest. I'm fairly new too, but everybody makes such an effort to make you feel right at home. Thanks for sharing. :heart:
     
  9. ShadeeLadee

    ShadeeLadee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    showing love

    I love this "peace" poet! Welcome and thank you.

    Come again

    SWT
     
  10. Reason

    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Welcome!!

    Love is a beautiful thang! Im diggin ya style! Keep posting!

    Reas
     
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