Black Poetry : First Things, First

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by watzinaname, Nov 28, 2003.

  1. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm not ready to do that yet,
    but step into the tub.
    It's full of lavender oil my pet,
    step in, I'll give you a snack.
    Taste this luscious strawberry
    Dip one in some cream.
    Close your eyes and savor it.
    Just like in my dream.
    Should I wash your back?
    Let me soap the sponge.
    I'll make a trail to your sweet :eek:hmy:
    Opps, did I say that?
    Time to make a toast,
    Here's to you and me.
    You're the one I love the most,
    now, time to dry you off.
    Oh you smell so good.
    Soft from head to toe.
    Just the way my baby should,
    off to bed we go.
     
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    ahhh very nice
    feeling the tenderness
    wonderful indeed
    Peace
     
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    oh i likes very nice....smoothin
    thanks for sharing
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks Bluewater and mzblkangel, I appreciate your comments. Just felt like writing about the calmer side of life.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this was so warm ....u go poet of the week
    lovin this side of u flowin
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    That side usually peeks out and runs back in. Thanks so much, Rich.
     
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    u bring her back out so i can embrace her and make her stay out side to flow ......most welcomeeeeeeeeeeee
     
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