Black Haiku : First Response

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by 1poetsought, Jul 1, 2013.

  1. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'd like this haiku
    to embrace you completely
    flatter me respond
     
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    she says, i'm right here
    responding with my love, dear
    in life and haiku
     
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    Like a cataract
    In the sea you 2 live write
    Like Stevie Wonder

    Recongnizing all
    Vibrations in ink beauty
    Materialize
     
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    It's about the fact
    Hue being not what it seems
    Made for our beings
     
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