Quiet Poetry Lounge : First Offering: Cry

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by tarea, Aug 17, 2003.

  1. tarea

    tarea New Member MEMBER

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    My mama once told me that when you cry
    you release all sorrow
    She said that crying was like wrapping an age-worn blanket around your soul and thrusting life back into an unkempt heart
    All fear, all pain, all self-imposed disparities free themselves when you
    release
    Crying ain't such a bad thing, she said
    Don't be ashamed girl
    Let your soul breath
    Sometimes all our souls need to breath
    Cry baby
    Go on and cry
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    welcome welcome welcome !!!!!

    welcome to destee.com poetic quiet flowz
    welcome to the family of bond
    crying release the soul that pains
    crying open feels all the same
    it's o'k to cry , go head let it flow
    this was very nicely written .......thanks for this
    welcome to the family hope to read more of you
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    welcome:wave:
    your momma
    yes is wise
    i like your poem
    it is OK to cry
    looking forward
    to read more :heart:
    Peace
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Cry me a river, again and again-

    Tarea, WELCOME!!!
     
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    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i cry you cry we cry together...
    the bible says when you cry youre heart is on hist honest condition..


    love this welcome sister
    much love liberty!
     
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    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WELCOME Tarea

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    hey gurl my momma says same ting...great minds think alike eh :)
    ironically enough i have a hard time cryin...bs of life did that to me...but i'm learning...this was heartfelt :)
     
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