Black Poetry : FIRST MOVEMENT

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by turtle1, Mar 3, 2004.

  1. turtle1

    turtle1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    EXPRESSING A WORD
    A LOVE
    A FEELING
    A SIMPLE TOUCH OF THE SKIN
    SENDING ME IN A BLISSFUL HARMONY
    MELODIC TONES OF YOUR VOICE SENDING ME
    AS MY HEART COMES TO A HALF REST AFTER EVERY BEAT
    STEADY LIKE A METRONOME
    A CONSTANT RHYTHM
    WHILE STREAMS OF PASSION FLOW LIKE A TRUMPETS FLARE
    THE HEAT OF MY DESIRE BORE DEEP LIKE A BASS HORN
    AND YOUR APPROVAL TICKLES THE AIR LIKE THE STRINGS OF A VIOLIN
    EXPOSING YOURSELF LIKE THE REED OF A SAXOPHONE
    I TONGUE EACH NOTE FAST AND SLOW
    TILL THE HIGH NOTE OF THE CRESCENDO
    ARTICULATING EVERY MOVEMENT
    AS MY FINGERS PLAY LIKE ON A HARP
    RAISING THE TEMPO OF THE MOVEMENT
    I PLAY SOLO ON MY SLIDE TROMBONE
    MAKING SURE EVERY NOTE HAS BEEN HIT
    LIKE A DIRECTOR
    BRINGING THE MUSIC TO A CLIMAX
    EVERY INSTRAMENT BLARE
    THEN
    SILENCE
    PARALYSED BY WONDERFUL MELODIC SOUNDS
    THE SENSITIVE SOUNDS OF YOUR VOICE CALMS DOWN
    LIKE A SWEET CLARINET
    LEAVING ME RIDING ON CLOUD LIKE NOTES OF A PICCOLO
    ITS FINE'
    BUT HOLD ON
    I HAVE TO SHOW YOU HOW THE SECOND MOVEMENT GOES
    THIS IS JUST THE FIRST PIECE............ :flirt:
     
  2. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow....you created a beautiful poetic symphony here. Keep flowing.
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :wave:
    where U been? QQ
    likes this drop....
    good to ready you
    again...dont stay
    away to long...dang....
    Peace
    Angel
     
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    When your near..."I hear/feel a SYMPHONY"

    Brother Turtle...where have you been all my poetic life...

    Oh my Brother...I think I'm in love with your gift...

    your words lifted me so high....

    I didn't want to come down...so I read it again & again...

    Encore...Encore... :spinstar:


    :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown:
     
  5. Nita

    Nita Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    FLoE Turtle

    Do I detect a musician...cause you play'D the heck outta those words....
    Lov'N the floE
     
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    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    writer's block my oboe :lol:
    this was a symphony son....tyte
    one love
    khasm
     
  7. turtle1

    turtle1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    fam!!

    Thank you!!!
    I love you all!!!!
     
  8. triniti424

    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :blush: why turtle I- :blush: I jus-:blush:
    hehehe
    Brotha you KNOW this is TIGHT so dont EVEN front...and it sounds jus SMOOOOOTH on the mic :) Sistas yall need to come into chat cause when brotha Turtle is on the mic...praises be good gracious its too good lolol :D
     
  9. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    man brutha T this was awesome
    the creativity and warmth was tyte
     
  10. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Now you know that this Piece is a beautifull piece of art....

    or should i just put it down simple and say :teach:

    this is a Bombiggi Peace...




    Love libertylady :cool:
     
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