Black Poetry : First Loves

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by sarcasm4eva, Jul 20, 2003.

  1. sarcasm4eva

    sarcasm4eva Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    They r the worst(simple as that!)
    Memories is all u have.
    Tryin to move on from the past.
    Pictures,
    Letters that u wrote,
    Messages that were sent.
    All this, u never wanna 4get.
    Constantly havin u thinkin y it didnt work.
    Knowin it was f'd up from the start.
    But u still chose 2 give him ur heart.
    What could u possibly do?
    Deny u were really feelin him.
    So u gave him a chance.
    Not knowin what u were about 2 go through.
    Or better yet, if u r gonna make it through w/out a broken heart.
    Emotions start flyin,
    Clashin head 2 head.
    U see what u want,
    He's right there, in front of u.
    He just stepped aside, I let it ride.
    Wasnt gonna fight 4 somethin I couldnt have.
    We remained friends.
    Both of us still wantin a lil part of eachother.
    What can I say?
    He'll always be.....
    My first lover.

    ::heart::
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Whoa...I was sacred to read this cuz I knew in my heart you'd unleash the very same feelings I have :) But Gurl, thi was so good, on you p's and q's qith this one. :) :toast:
     
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    sarcasm4eva Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    swtT ur comments are greatly appreciated........had to hit y'all w/somethin hot 4 my return. ::toast::
     
  4. Alizentang

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    Another wonderful poet that's gonna
    have me searchin the archives...:)

    This was very good. Welcome back:grouphug:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    str8 off da chain
    tyte scribe let it flow on !
     
  6. sarcasm4eva

    sarcasm4eva Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanx alizentang.....u have a lot of searchin to do.lol. i've read ur works too, i like ur style. keep flowin. much love :)
     
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    thanx rich.......i take it ur still flyin high, watchin over us ladies here at destee's. much love :)
     
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    TRUE, SO TRUE... TYTE FLOW.
     
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    very nice
    that first love
    is a for ever
    in the thoughts
    growing from
    that first love
    very nice
    Peace
     
  10. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hey this is an interesting poem....
    somthing different it made me think about this ....


    you know about first love...



    And i come to an conclusion...
    i said to myself.........

    NO!...........................MY first LOVE.......Will BE MY LASt....


    but i did enjoyed youre poem..keep writing poet
    much love libertylada
     
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