Black Poetry : First Love (Yeah I'm Back Ya'll!!!!)

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by GQ, Oct 4, 2001.

  1. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    On a warm summer night surrounded by
    just the ocean's song, I paused in gentle
    thought to reminisce of how we came
    to be

    Loving kewlly with inside and outside
    passions reserved for only one; you
    became my First Love at a moment's
    glance

    Caressing softly with whispered breaths
    of sultry lullabies; you entered my existence
    as my First Love with simply your fragrant
    touch

    The true meaning of your raptured bliss cascaded
    deeply within my soul where no woman has
    ever found sanctuary; yet as my First Love, you
    lit the pathway to my heart with smoothness
    personified

    (C)2001 GQInc
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Welcome back Q

    man lay dem love vibes out so it can be felt:heart:
     
  3. blakverb

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    Gone for a minute.....come back with a splash. It's about time blak man be missin' your scribe (cause ya vibe neva left). Some things neva change I see. Welcome back bro.

    oh yeah, the piece was "Kewl" GQ style!

    blak
     
  4. Reason

    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Uh Huh...

    I see you slipped right back into ya crown too bruh! lol Glad to see ya!

    Reas
     
  5. LISTERSCRIBIN'

    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    gq-man, this is simply just a lovely piece. keep on scribin', your work is always very enjoyable.
     
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    Welcome back my brother!!!!!! What a way to come back...
     
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    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    GQ

    it is a beautiful thang seeing your name up on the boards again!
    Welcome home!

    a
     
  9. j'hiah

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    nicely done and welcome back....
     
  10. Destee

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    aaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhh GQ!

    so glad you're back home again!!

    :heart:

    Destee
     
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