Black Poetry : first kiss of forever

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by dnommo, Jan 24, 2002.

  1. dnommo

    dnommo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    just reminiscing and cleaning out old notebooks...

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    Adolescent nervousness embraced by love
    I held her close to me as we stood
    Eye to eye, face to face, as I looked
    Into her hazel eyes and smiled;

    I placed my hands in the small of
    Her back puling her closer to me
    So that my heart shall mesh with
    Hers until they beat in harmony;

    I look to her whispering in her ear
    To close her eyes for the rays of love
    Were so bright that all I could see
    Was her reflection in the shadows;

    She lifted her hands over my shoulders
    So that I was surrounded by her love
    And closed her smiled to become a
    Place of anticipation of my delivery;

    I lifted one hand to outline her eyebrows
    And trace the dynamics of her face so
    I could push her hair away from her face
    And gently lovingly play with her ear;

    She lets out a sigh as her head adjust to
    Receive my touches and I smile as she
    Bites her bottom lip slightly so not to
    Vocally express her inward fires of joy;

    I place the fullness of my hand upon her
    Cheek allowing my long fingers to extend
    Up the side as my thumb rested on the corner
    of her lips so that she may rest her head;

    This is when I move closer to her, outlining
    The dimensions of her cheek bone with the
    Gentleness of my kisses tracing and retracing
    My steps as she smiles from the celebration;

    And as I return to just below her lips I kiss
    The spot between her chin and her bottom
    Lip that she bites so anxiously and I quietly
    move up to enjoy the sweetness of her heart.

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  2. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    as Sade would say the kiss of life .....

    something about a kiss that means more than the rest...
    nice flow, again
    jh.
     
  3. dnommo

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    thansk for the read bro....

    one.
     
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    D'Mo...

    Smooth mouth 2 mouth mos' def!!!

    :peace:
    GQ
     
  5. MapleXtract

    MapleXtract Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    D...

    ...you gotta teach
    me how to express
    emotions at this
    level. Love is you
    man, definitely...

    I lub ( :heart: ) it...
     
  6. dnommo

    dnommo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Maple....

    i will be holding a seminar in this area real soon...well, whenever you show up :D :rolling: :spin: :star: :jumping:

    thanks for the read poet. it is always a pleasure to experience you...

    GQ, i can't let you and reason take all da ladies now can i? I'm just looking for one...y'all can have da rest.... :D

    thanks for the read bro'

    one.
     
  7. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    D.


    umm... i'ont know 'bout Maple... but SunShyne thinks
    she'll be stoppin' by the Meadow in 'bout 10 mins for
    that "seminar"!! :D

    this was beauty incarnate... & i felt each word!

    :heart:
    SunShyne~
     
  8. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    man Mr.D

    da notebook holds memories of da kiss
    of memory reminds me of my first sugar smack !
    tyght flow gonna check out da rest !:D
     
  9. dnommo

    dnommo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    GA...imma waitin...better bring an overnight bag...:rolleyes:

    my seminars are a two day event... :wink:

    $$$RICH$$$...thanks bro for the love...

    one.
     
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    I may need to do security for YOU!!! lol especially if you gone continue to droppem like this...lol

    Madd Respect
    Reas
     
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