Black Poetry : first kiss of forever

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by dnommo, May 17, 2001.

  1. dnommo

    dnommo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Adolescent nervousness embraced by love
    I held her close to me as we stood
    Eye to eye, face to face, as I looked
    Into her hazel eyes and smiled;

    I placed my hands in the small of
    Her back puling her closer to me
    So that my heart shall mesh with
    Hers until they beat in harmony;

    I look to her whispering in her ear
    To close her eyes for the rays of love
    Were so bright that all I could see
    Was her reflection in the shadows;

    She lifted her hands over my shoulders
    So that I was surrounded by her love
    And closed her smiled to become a
    Place of anticipation of my delivery;

    I lifted one hand to outline her eyebrows
    And trace the dynamics of her face so
    I could push her hair away from her face
    And gently lovingly play with her ear;

    She lets out a sigh as her head adjust to
    Receive my touches and I smile as she
    Bites her bottom lip slightly so not to
    Vocally express her intimate joy;

    I place the fullness of my hand upon her
    Cheek allowing my long fingers to extend
    Up the side as my thumb rested on her
    Cheek so that she may rest her head;

    This is when I move closer to her, outlining
    The dimensions of her cheek bone with the
    Gentleness of my kisses tracing and retracing
    My steps as she smiles from the celebration;

    And as I return to just below her lips I kiss
    The spot between her chin and her bottom
    Lip that she bites so anxiously and I quietly
    move up to enjoy the sweetness of her kiss;
     
  2. MapleXtract

    MapleXtract Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Awww, D...

    ...I get so, emotional, when I read your pieces. I, either, wanna cry out in depression, or joy. This one brought on that joyous effect. *Lovin' this :heart:warming piece*
     
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    no disrespect but i just aint believing you was mackin like dat on your first kiss.
    Personally when i got my first kiss it was all i could do not to shout out loud "hal la lua" and go tell all my friends

    nice flow poet
    thanks
     
  4. dnommo

    dnommo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :D lol thanks Shaz but actually i was talking about that first kiss with someone new not my very first kiss. my very first kiss caused me to do cartwheels down the street...

    although i wasn't tryin to mack it was a very special time....

    so was every kiss after that...

    Maple,

    thanks for the read. i enjoy seeing your name pop up on my scribes...
     
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    dnommo

    Yes...Yes...Yes I understand this!!! Yet, it's been so long I can only imagine (well, January):rolleyes:
     
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    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    dnommo,

    this is priceless brother. yeah I'm convinced we're twins.

    one love,blak
     
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    dnommo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    entering from the garden

    afri,

    it's been that long huh? :lol: thanks for the read...


    Blak,

    no doubt we are twins :toast: i didn't get your response from my message earlier...just acopy of my message...hit me back...

    thanks for the read peeps...


    returning to the garden...
     
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    Im feel'n this.......
    :kiss: experiencing de ja vu :kiss:
     
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