Black Haiku : first haiku...taste this..

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by mkhaya lo', Aug 10, 2002.

  1. mkhaya lo'

    mkhaya lo' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    taste this black water
    take it in with all your greed
    curiosity..
     
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    hummm! to da flava
    wit all dis greed so tasty
    poetically
     
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    you sure this is your 1st? :)
    ...i liked this!!... a lot.

    itsallLove, chile.

    elayne.
     
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    I promise you elayne, its my first time experimenting with different types of poetry-like haiku and acutually it excites me because i feel like i'm taking it to another level....thanks for the encouragement....:D :D
     
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    Hi^5




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