Quiet Poetry Lounge : First Friend...I Believe She Will Know Someday...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by watzinaname, Oct 7, 2008.

  1. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sometimes....we can do
    our very best
    Dot every i, cross every t
    Get an A on every test

    We can toil so hard
    the sweat drips from our brow
    Work double over time
    As many hours as the day will allow

    Give a plethora of patience, despite a world of worry
    while providing continuous comfort and care
    Putting others in the forefront...before yourself
    Giving much more than a lion's share

    Yet even after giving...all of that
    Sometimes things don't work out
    I can only imagine how difficult this must be
    Outwardly strong, inwardly needing to scream and shout

    But your loved ones know, you know, and
    God knows all that you have done
    And you shall be blessed for all your selflessness,
    all the love you've given and all the compassion

    And one day, she will know
    How fortunate she is
    that you love her so...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    just maybe if she look pass her own self ......i'm feeling this because it reminds me of something in my life
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Surely her blessings will come, not always as we want them...but always on time.
    Awesome write poet ...as always ...^5
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes Rich, it is my hope she'll be able to look past self...one day. Thank you.
    Her blessings shall come, they probably have already begun. Thank you Sister queent.
     
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    watz did you take a peek in my life journal..feeling this write more than you'll evr know...awesonely exquiste write poet
     
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    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Good Evening Watz...

    Have you ever read a piece that touched soul-deep
    you swear you were meant to read it, as if its apart of
    the healing process? Well, this piece is that to me.
    Thanks for this poetic-dose-of-medicine. I feel better already.

    And I'm sure, whoever it was created for, after she read it, feels better too.


    Be blessed
    Coco
     
  7. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you for letting me know you can relate, and I'm humbled by your props asimplepoet.
    That my words could possibly aid you in healing, well, once again I am humbled. Thankz a million Coco. Peace.
     
  8. LovesDestiny

    LovesDestiny Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This piece was creative and real! We don't always recognize our value at the moment but it always comes in time!

    Excellent piece Sis Watz!
     
  9. 4EVERLUV

    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    watz:
    I enjoyed this from the beginnng to the end.
    Beautiful!

    Much Luv
     
  10. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes in time we know just how much we mean to another, thank you so much Sis LovesDestiny.
    Glad to know you enjoyed this so 4EverLuv, thank you much.
     
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