Black Poetry : First Fall Crunch!

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  1. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    An after dinner stroll with my canine companion.
    I observe nature quietly changing round and
    about me. See the first Harvest Moon above
    me and feel the first crunch of the leaves
    beneath my feet, smell the fallish smell that
    seems to come around the end of October
    and the beginning of November.

    What a dessert for my senses as I look at the
    worlds luniar menses, I realize quite by surprise
    the scenery changing right before my eyes.
    Before I can catch my breath and pause to just
    be....The glow of the moon rounding a tree!
    Oh what a wonder the seasons do bring.
    And amazing ,phenomenal consistent thing.

    I feel the leaves crunching under my moving feet
    and find I have incorporated them in each little
    beat....step....crunch.....step......crunch!
    Boy, I missed this feeling so much!
    Just smelling invisible roses and listening to sleeping
    bird's song. I find myself peaceful as I walk along.
    And the first crunch of fall......at my feet!
    BJS(C)2001
     
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    epiphany Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Mz. B

    Lovely vision in this poem
    of crunching leaves
    evening scene
    cool breeze
    had me walking with ya.....


    Epihany :heart:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    gotta agree wit Epip

    u send a vision of grace here as i look pass the cloudy space:)
     
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    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I like this flo

    and I love the sound the dry fall leaves make beneath my feet. I was feeling this also. Thanks, Ms B :)

    Madd Sistahly Love :heart:
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  5. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    COCO, EPIPHANY AND RICH!

    We write for the sheer joy of writing, and some of us are just
    compelled as if it were a calling, for me it is both. You are the
    frosting on the cake......Writers write for writers sake...
    But, a readers voice does motivation make!
    BLESSINGS ON YA HOUSE!!!!!!!!:D
     
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