Black Poetry : First Encounters

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  1. Jazz4u

    Jazz4u Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    He was the first lyric to my poetic melodies
    A rebirth of a memory that never existed
    He was that
    Arrow that
    Broke through my walls
    and
    left his imprint on my lips savored even now as the flavor still
    Resonates dormant tingles that
    Leaves me giggling in the satisfaction of the knowledge I found initially in him
    Ignited still by the presents of theses flames that burned just before my
    Fingertips brush against his bare skin cloaking me in hot honey dripping in its
    Sweet indulgence even as cavities formed
    I
    Resorted to living in the pleasures of only acknowledging the pain when I couldn’t eat through the caramel that formed around my heart crystallizing the emotions associated
    Incarcerated are my personal betrayals on some life without the possibility of parole because if it were ever to be released the air itself would be on fire with the sins that I committed on the behalf of you
    I
    Became the match that sustained a blaze that was responsible for burning down the whole **** forest of my independent choices
    Grateful in not a pathetic way because I wasn’t looking for but guilty in looking forward to encounters with this thing that eluded through out my life in its hurtful peek-a-boo games
    I was
    Drown to the hypnotic way his eyes provoke me to utter love in his direction oozing out with ease it rolled off my tongue whistled through my teeth to ambush the air in its sweet relief
    I
    Loved you swings from my hips as it ROcks through this piece of heaven left behind to acquire a concealed heart of broken promises
    I surrendered before I even knew there was time to defend and in defeat found me
    as
    He my co-conspirator became the muse behind the cascading diamonds of my waterfall that even now is the beautiful meaning of my tears…I loved you first echoes in its release of our final kiss…I miss u
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this was truely the bomb

    the last line ....(I loved you first echoes in its release of our final kiss ...I miss u
    let that pen speak on !
     
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    WHOA!! good one jazz :)
     
  4. Jazz4u

    Jazz4u Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    awe thanks ppl...j
     
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    Very Nice..... (snaps)....ahhhh love.
     
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    wow..
    wonderful
    my goodness
    very nice indeed.
    Peace
     
  7. Jazz4u

    Jazz4u Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks bluewater
    always much respect
    j.
     
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    Incarcerated are my personal betrayals on some life without the possibility of parole because if it were ever to be released the air itself would be on fire with the sins that I committed on the behalf of you (Loved this line)



    WOW.......this piece expresses the essence of "passion", that floods every element of your being, leaving nothing to be salvaged in it's wake..................Feeling this piece.........WOW
     
  9. Jazz4u

    Jazz4u Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i'm sorry sunkissed thank u 2
    and angelicsage thanks
    i wrote it a month out of a relationship (kind of reflecting i guess)
    j.
     
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