Black Poetry : Fireworks pt. 1

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  1. Prince Yakeem

    Prince Yakeem Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Fireworks pt.1


    Does FIRE work?
    Ask the nine year old burn victim
    He feels inferno each time that water hits him
    Young Jim reminded of the hose that blasted
    When FIRE men put out his face of flames
    Used to laugh at the slow kids, now a freak in chains
    He paces in his room nicknamed his "tomb of shame"
    Wants to run and play but has no time for games
    When you look like the recipant of acid rain
    Takes many pills in constant pain
    Mother wont look his away had another son with his same name
    Like Jim was a defective toy should have treated him as a blessed boy
    No one knew that he went insane, Each time he would make a mistake
    His own father would say "Curse my dumb son with the melted brain"
    FIREWORKS!


    Fireworks for Freedom
    But freedom of who?
    Freedom of me? or Freedom of you?
    The whole celebration seems pagan from my point of view
    In a world full of lies where is the truth?
    So many questions do the answers ly with you?
    Trapped in the subconscious
    Perception for your minds eye view


    To be continued on the "4th of you lie"
     
  2. ladyafrika

    ladyafrika Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    dang man that was some real serious ish!
    nice read,nice post,nice write!
    cant wait to her the otha parts!!!!1
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    word workz july forbee !
    tyte drop
     
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    I have a "4th of you lie" tape...
    oh yes, I'm very aware of the lies told
    wonderful piece you layed out before us, thanks
     
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    very deep stuff indeed...enjoyed the read....Peace Angel
     
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    You're truly working with those fireworks...First there's the play on words, then you bring to our attention the injustices therein. Flow on, this was great.
     
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    pt.2 please i want more ...................................
     
  8. Prince Yakeem

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    sorry for the wait It has been posted!
     
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