Black Poetry : Firewall

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    I never met u
    but i know ur
    with me in heart
    immediately
    ur walls found
    themselves
    devoid
    i lone to hear
    your poem of
    salvation
    yet in creative
    gesture of welcome
    my body arch for u
    inside the temple of
    my lasting soul
    leaving a field of bald
    fire burnin as i yearn
    it must have been very
    easy my belove meeting
    the island of north
    the cost of my heart
    manifesting a memory
    i so craddle at da west
    cuddlin under yo glaze
    this firewall burns deeper
    as i exhale to inhale life
    it was then i notice ya
    inner beauty of love
    shinning in a sparkle of
    what could be or maybe
    this yearn just a myth
    see i found u on the
    mystal sunrise and in a
    tropic dance of radiant
    drifting maze so i too
    plant the iron seed my
    room become the soil
    of flowing blossome love
    i also know your true
    heart and love is awesome
    expanse of beauty & pleasure
    and hold such a desire of fire
    to my spirit that invites u
    i've become a self-composure
    brewing a storm or rage to
    hold u in the empty arms
    i can be the bravest spirit
    yet the weakest heart
    my soul is whole and engulf
    in your everlasting belove
    i know your worth, come to me !

    Dyamond Creation
    2005 Nu~Wave production
    $R
     
  2. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Awesome piece, I have much respect for your pen. this piece was well written
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This flowed so genuinely, like a potent seed sprouting from the soul's earth. Just beautiful.
     
  4. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    thankz u ever so much queentswana your voice and love are defined
    as nubian

    awwww thankz so much Watz your words means so much to me and
    happy u enjoyed my poetic mind at the firewall ......things a mind feel
    when love is about in heart

    Peace sista Queenz of Heart............................................................
     
  5. Ireadastory

    Ireadastory Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You are true poet my brotha. I feel the passion in this piece. Beautiful flow.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    thankz for feeling what i pose inside me , my dearest Ireadastory
     
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    That line was absolutely $$PRICELESS$$...Loved it!

    This poem was fire, milk and honey...all in one

    How do...you do it?

    Nice work poet!
     
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    kente417mojo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks for sharing this great poem $$RICH$$. It's always a pleasure man. :peace:
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Precious... truly valuable!
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    in time the love will feast on the diviness of ones heart
    the thought the vision folded in to a masterpiece i am vibing with this flow
    love when you bring it alive as you just did....Angel
     
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