Black Poetry : ~~~~FIREDOVE~~~~

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  1. PropheticNsyght

    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Fever...

    Heat and flavor running
    through my veins.
    When I awake to the world
    I continuously see red....
    My dreams are tinged in passion and
    the sweetness of a firedove.
    Reborn and revived
    as the feelings for the other one
    move quickly thru my flow....

    I'm in a upstream motion against
    the power and strength of a downstream
    current....
    Currently i'm being tossed and turned by
    the fury and fire from your touch.
    A touch that isn't a touch so much as
    it is just my imagination when i'm close to you
    and such.

    My passion-fruit and the way I close my
    eyes and breath in a poker-style royal suit...
    I must have left my life-force on the
    side of the road somewhere back there....
    Blow me in the wind,
    Toss me around the trees,
    Leave me bathing in the skies and
    walking through the seas.

    Malaysia to my Eastern river
    China to my red sea...
    You delight me in 1000 colors and
    feelings of white-hot earth tones...
    blow in my heart and whisper in my eyes....
    Take me away on a song in G
    and leave my body clinching and relaxing
    to the strains of your darkly, beautiful rhapsody.

    Fever....

    Copyright 2004
    PropheticNsyght​
     
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    FIREDOVE is contagious, its outbreak outrageous,

    A GREAT WORK!
     
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    And this fever takes control of one's senses, making you envision colors, streams and dreams in such vivid ways.....wow.
     
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    feverish firedove takes control dis was hot off da press......
     
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    :wave: Haaaaaaaaaay PropheticNsyght :wave:

    THIS IS BEAUTIFUL POETRY !!!! WOW !!!!

    GOSH ... what can i say ... we aint all blessed the same!

    So glad to have you with us and sharing such talent! Thank You!

    Please join us tonight in voice chat ... www.destee.com/chat ... and here are ... Instructions For Entering Voice Chat ... just in case you need them!

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    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    All of you are beautiful and the reason that I enjoy doing what I do. Each of you have been blessed with such a gift and love and for that I will be eternally greatful! Thank you so much family and especially you Mrs. Destee :luvv: :luvv: :luvv: :luvv: :luvv: :luvv: :luvv: :luvv: