Black Poetry : Fire

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  1. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    If fire is what i am, let me burn inside ur soul, to be that flame that never gives out
    If fire is what I am, then let me heat ur heart and release steam
    If fire is what I am, let me make u hot, make u sweat the residue of love
    If fire is what I am, then be the coals to help produce our blaze
    If fire is whay I am, let me ignite ur spirit and warm ur body
    If fire is what I am, let our passion free and let pressure esculate
    If fire is what I am, let me make ur temperature rise to a level of escatasy
    If fire is what I am, let ur climate connect with my heat and our weather will deliver electricity.
     
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    very nice poem..keep flowin :)
     
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    very nice! I hate to say it though...I'm scared of fire, but the fire you speak of sounds good enough to get burned by. :)
     
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    woah!!! HOT! tyte!
     
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    thank you.
     
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    play with fire you might get burned,
    but luv and fire is always earned.

    Fire is what you are, and I am a simple match. think about that. :) peace and blessins keep flowin poet
     
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    Nice flow!
     
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    Poeticlyspeakin, Blazing poem! - keep flowing...

    Allow me to gently throw in my two cents of new sense on this fiery subject...here goes

    If fire is what I am and heat is what she is
    Then it is only right that my afrocentricity energizes her electricity
    If fire is what I am and the beat is what she feels
    Then it is only right that my individualism mezmerizes her magnetism...
     
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    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WHOA! I like that! say that then, you can help me write my poetry anytime.lol.
     
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